@wost on the silver one, thin the O out a bit, and take some length off the T, and loose the arrows., and on the green one, looks reall tight bro, but shorten and fatten the top of the T and i think it would add more flow to it.
Nice fade on that first Wost piece.
no you dont, looks like your other stuff...remove the uglyness on the d, do a normal kinda e, do not connect just two letters at least not the way you did it. try to paint more smoothly..
My stuff is still very toy but I'm trying.
Goms: I like that silver wost. I think you can leave the length on the T if you put a similar piece on the W to give it some symetry.
Debut: I'm liking this better than your previous work. Clean it up a bit. I agree with disconnecting the U and T. Keep it up. I like that B a lot.
Last edited by Phat 2; 09-21-2011 at 08:02 PM.
from my trip to copenhagen
Double decker train:
excuse the shit quality, but it was pitch black and had no flash cam, so this is the best quality I could get with my night-vision cam... hopefully my friends who benched the next morning got a better quality flick - will update
Christiania Legal wall with DIAS1:
Sydhavnen Hall of Fame with DOGGIE:
daaaaaamn phat i gives youse respect
that last flick goes hard. feelin it
Last edited by Norfsuthr; 09-22-2011 at 07:02 PM.
thanks for the crits norfsuthr. I normally don't listen to phil because he sucks. I know I'm whack, but I also know that I'm constantly trying harder and harder to progress. Definitely not gonna let someone that paints 100 times less than I do bring me down.
Phil talks to my e-hand right now, so he get e-gnored
but thanks for the comments, guys
Yep, I paint 100x less than you do because I don't post it on Bombingscience.
anyway, your letters have bad structure, are flared incorrectly, those thin spaghetti lines going around your letters look stupid and have no flow, your drips are going in the wrong direction, as well as not looking anything like drips (look at some real drips to get an understanding of how they clump together to drip, instead of dripping individually. It'll help you a LOT), the H's shoes look too different from each other, as well as being different sizes without perspective difference in the letters, The anarchy A is hilariously overplayed, boring, and hypocritical, especially because you're some fat fuck who moderates a graffiti forum with an iron fist wrapped around your limp dick. Your T is too covered up, as well as having too much dead space, and the kink flips in the wrong direction. You should have it facing another way in order to accentuate flow. Your 2 also has bad structure, your outline is boring, those drips are GODAWFUL, and those quote things on the left and right of your piece throw off your flow even more.
No, I wasn't fucking with him. His graffiti sucks total dick since the first time I saw it. The only good thing I can say about this piece is that the fill is simple enough to not make me want to vomit everywhere.
phil speaks da truth. phat you got really good control but the pieces are wack as fuck
yep phats shit is pretty wack he needs to drop only simples for a year then move on from there