Walls

[ribcage]

yo thats way better than the other stuff you posted. I got 3 things for ya other than workin on letter structure:
1 add a shadow or 3d, it will help the piece pop off the wall.
2 more color with your fill, I like that you used a good amount of color as a whole, but the fill is boring, kinda takes away from that euro style lettering
3 do a second outline around all the letters and 3d(if it has 3d), It will make the letters pop out from the bg. If you decide to do, you gonna want to make it either a color that contrasts with your first outline(black) or a color that contrasts with the background(light blue). So for this piece I would have done an orange 2nd outline because it contrasts a little bit with both.

hope this is somewhat insightful... keep paintin

[eriekid]

props to ados thats clean as fuck!!

[porkyPig]

what do you write erie kid??

[Strange Journeys]

pitlord thats tight!
aeso you gotta take more time man, widen up your bars and clean up your lines yo. you'll learn better can control as you go though

[TheDoctor]

i woild love some crits on this, (first time painting) been sketching and tryin to work up my own style and all. any ways i should start lookin to improve this? (used the absolute shittiest paint i could get XD) just gotta say, ive always liked graff, been interested in it, after today and auctually painting I FUCKING LOVE IT and would do wahtever it takes to move out of being a damn toy.haha

[Pitlord]

@rib: thanks for your time. Your crit is really helping me!

props to ados thats clean as fuck!!

Thanks, but its a d, not an a in the beginning

[MN Nice]

Its dDos? da fuck?

[Pitlord]

Its dDos? da fuck?

Problem?

[dankbudz]

your avatar creeps me the fuck out.. lol

[Pitlord]

your avatar creeps me the fuck out.. lol

It's supposed to give you the creeps

[Phat 2]

[lord_plankton]

i feel like your always doing too much stuff around your piece...lots of tags n shit which takes away from the piece itself, like the colors though

[. lewd]

Its dDos? da fuck?

Distributed Denial Of Service ???

[eriekid]

ddos my bad bro its clean tho and so is tat phat2! ill post some pics hold up..

[eriekid]

i write both of these math and revive revi or re for short aint tha greatest just a couple quickies ill post more later!

[Phat 2]

thanks for the comment plank. can i get some more solid crits?
its all done with cheap dollar cans

[TheMackey]

phat i know i usually hate but thats prolly the best thing ive seen from u. Its well structured. The extenisons arnt all retarded the only thing i dislike is the arrow but i know u put it there to balance out the 2. over all nice though.

[Phat 2]

alright, here we go! thanks, I apreciate it coming from you. but still I need the negatives more than the positives. those are the useful ones. where's that fuck, phillip. come hate on my work please asshole.

[RES4]

good things:
the fade as far as i can tell is good, pic isnt great though so dont know how it looks up close
highlights in the 3d are nice as well

bad things:
3d on the two isnt great
the top of the two is fat and the middle bar is real thin in the middle but the rest of the piece has pretty consistent bar widths. Same for the P
the left hand bar of the H looks shit the way it overlaps the P
white highlights are a mess, i understand your using shit paint but if thats the case dont do them at all. if they werent there the piece would look a lot cleaner
the arrow under the piece is gay, even gayer than a normal underline
exclamation marks, why are they different on both sides?
the second outline isnt even, for example left of the p and on the 2
and you dont need a third black outline, the whole point of the second outline is to make the piece pop, the third outline kills this
would look better without all the tags

at first it looks really clean but the more you look at it the more of a mess it looks. id like to see you do a black and white piece, no 3d, and work on making your bars even and cleaning up the outline

[Phillip McDougall]

You look like you did a large version of your handstyle. Literally, it's right next to it and looks the exact same. You have much better structure on this piece than any of your others, but your flow is still off. That arrow is also facing the wrong direction, it's going in the opposite direction of your flow. Your 2 needs to work WITH your piece, not the other way around. The fade is pretty good for dollar cans. That A needs work, though. And the curve part of the P, the bottom especially, needs to be thicker. That's the only part of your piece with such a thin bar, and it's the wrong spot it would flair at. You're starting to get an understanding of structure, which is good, but you still need to work on flow and composition. Try making a piece that leans like this / / / \ \ \ \ with one of your addons at the bottom middle.