hahaha just noticed that, do you just outline a tag?Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall
hahaha just noticed that, do you just outline a tag?
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
yeah I know. this is EXACTLY what I did. I thought it was clear that it's a large version of a handstyle. except with colors, 3D and an outline... I did it on purpose, that's the whole concept here. and this is how I'm starting to understand structure. by working with the regular tag and working my way up to doing the piece. for now, it's the same as the tag, next time, I'll probably play around with it..
and the fact that it's a chisel tip marker effect, and to keep the consistent stroke angle, it only makes sense that the middle part of the 2 be so thin, and the quotes on the right be different than the ones on the left. which should also answer your comments, phil, about the wrong flares. there actually are no flares in the piece.
I aabsolutely agree on the part you mentioned regarding where the left bar of the H and the P overlap. it's the first thing I hated the most.
though the purple border I used wasn't really popping out of the white background in real life, so I added the black second border. it looks better in this flick though hmm *shrug*
ok, I guess I got what I needed. thanks for the comments and crits. real helpful. I'll stop hogging the thread now :P heh
either wany handstyle peice and you made it look clean as fuck. i like it no i loved it but still ..try turning your tag in to a piece.. add extensions nwhat not later.. it turns something simple into something great..
I haven't been on here very long, but that's the first time I've seen Phil give a ligit crit and not just talk shit. I also got a little bit of a sense of respect, but that could be due to the voice in my head reading it....
i dont think youll really learn structure just by outlining a tag, and the fact that you had to explain to us that it was a chisel tip effect means it doesnt work. plus if your going for a chisel tip effect then surely the horizontal bars on the A, T, 2 and the arrow should be thin?
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
What this fool said.
yo i really like it man, try thickening up the barz and this would be a solid peice,atm it just looks like a handstyle with 3d. but i like it man, good work. mabe also close up the inside of the 2 aswell, so there is about the same amount of negative space as the P and bottom of the A. just my .02
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Last edited by geargff; 10-07-2011 at 11:58 PM.
damn toys..
I don't see your contribution to critique, graffguy sucka.
It all sucks. Theres your crits. Hit the books.
his shit is actually good i duno what ur tripping on.
post some of yours mr.bigshot. until then cut the shit
ya not bad, they're all nice and simple
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We must be seeing different pictures.
then u gota get ur eyes checked nigguh cus me n tasty know what reall *****s knoe. knawww mean?
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a throwie...among the first painted!
Days, Definitely get rid of the 2nd hump over your A. and work on the structure of every letter. I would say go more simple. No need for all those bumps on the Y and A.
Your D is nice and the S is pretty decent. Just work on can control and your A and Y.
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