Last edited by KingKozmik; 12-20-2011 at 08:40 PM.
yo stick to the notepads n blackbooks. Thats not appealing to the eye whatsoever. Get a feel for your throw on paper n then practice it somewhere private till its street worthy. keep at it tho im not tryin to discourage.Originally Posted by KingKozmik
some old shit
can't lie mase your buddies suck ass hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liking that throwie Derk
that throw needs an outline bro, should've used the white for that rather than doing lighting. And, not to be a dick, but those leaves or whatever just look wack.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
something new
Well might of turned out better if you had an actual outline but your letters are definately distinguisable and whats the little like pot leaf coming out the end? Don't have that unless its gonna be like some godlike thing of art and the colors of the leaf dont't mix with the rest of the piece make sure all your colors flow, Your A is a little bit to small your throwie would be better if it didn't seem so outline, its a decent throwie you just need to work on the little stuff.
Work on keeping the size of your letters the same
Color flow
Work on your little star thing in the bottom doesn't look right
Keep it on the paper before you go out, no point in wasting a wall if you don't even have down what your gonna throw up
can i get some feedback on this shit boys? much apreciated!
That toss is dope. Pieces need more structure though.
See how the lines on your piece are all squigly and unclean? Work on smooth solid strokes of the hand while maintaining the right angle with a wall. If you clean those up, and don't go over your outline with bars from the 3d, yo shit will improve bunches. Bombing helps with these things
and I just thought of this(these are all things I myself do a shitty job with) when you are going in for one big line on a letter you just gotta pound that outline into your head you know? Like when you got this huge long line you gotta get out on like the side of an o or any big curve and you just fuck it up halfway through? Shit's a buzzkill.....this kinda turned into me ranting but whatever
Last edited by Skadeem; 12-24-2011 at 01:17 PM.
imma repost this one right here
That's dope for sure phat.what kinda paint do you guys rock out there in the middle east?
i have better pics of this but i cant be bothered connecting the usb thingo to my phone, anyway u get the idea.
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
ey yo phats, i gots to say somthin bout your peice.
I would shorten all those extensions on top bars of p and t nad a's middle bar. bit thicker boath middle bars on h. the top and bottom bars of s are too wide and s in not in proportions. Fill seems fine to me, could be also a bit cleaner. Highlights are fine. Mistakes in 3D dont bother me, but bg is complete bullshit phat, wtf u doin? Im sure you can do it better.
@mori: dollar cans. but in this specific piece, all the blacks and whites are mtn94.
@sneez: thanks for the good crits. im with you on everything except the 3d mistakes and bg bit.
what 3d mistakes u talking about.. everything's going straight to the right.
and negga I dont have no bg there hahaha what bg?? I hope you're not talkign about the pink border. that was planned to just be a single line for second outline, but then I added those bullshit bubbles just to cover up some skeleton lines that were left sticking out from behind the piece.
regarding the cleanliness, blame it on the shitty phone flick.
here's a close up
damn it no comments on my burner piece? comon now
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
lol are you serious?^ A shit fill and poorly done outline. Not to mention the letters alone are weak.
smokeitup- you didnt even finish your fill? are you joking?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/thevegasjman21/
KOTE
been painting for a year and im only 15, crits please?
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
Bookmarks