ok so i supposed i havent got feedback cause i havent gave any, fair enough, so here goes,
drone - try shakin you rpaint more man, and take some time with it, it looks wayyy to rushed, even if its a heat spot do something that you can make look a bit tighter
snew-work on your shadow, i think it could be a bit bigger and needs to all go in the same direction, itll make your piece look bigger/take up more space.
kers-looks nice, but isnt there a big kers already in the friehgt scene? might be worth checkin into...