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    Quote Originally Posted by Each View Post
    ...the cold is sometimes an issue.
    yeah the cold and the inverted marking can. whoops. I tried to get that up in an hour... sucks, just kept trying different things, and fixing them again and again. sorta a waste of good fill with that shitty outline. wanted the H to match the S and my handstyle but the H is to far away and not thick enough. it's on a foot wide ledge as well so it's weird to paint with your arm extended to your side insted of infront of you... whatever. thanks for the critz. i was expecting much, much, worse. not very straight lines either. is the 3D off?
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    the 3d isnt really off, but it doesnt look like 3d. it just looks like the outline on the left side got thicker. looks more like a shadow
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    ^True


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    Quote Originally Posted by Each View Post
    the 3d isnt really off, but it doesnt look like 3d. it just looks like the outline on the left side got thicker. looks more like a shadow

    yeah, you're right.
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    soath. your piece doesnt look like its in a very heated spot, so just take your time. those spots are essentially for practice, cause there are no pigs there watchin. so next time you hit that spot take some time and maybe plan out a better piece cause you got all day. and yeah. those inverted cans are really only for roads and shit. not pieces
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    Quote Originally Posted by Each View Post
    soath. your piece doesnt look like its in a very heated spot, so just take your time. those spots are essentially for practice, cause there are no pigs there watchin. so next time you hit that spot take some time and maybe plan out a better piece cause you got all day. and yeah. those inverted cans are really only for roads and shit. not pieces
    yeah I had just got off a 12hr night shift, scrounged up some bottles for money, bought that stupid can... what a bitch. i thought i do a wicked handsteez and build off of it... fuck was i wrong. thanks for the feedback, you're right about the spot and everything.
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    Soath, thicken those bars, make the bar sizes proportionate, your 3D is way off, sketch it out for a while next time, take your time all your stuff looks kind of rushed

    Unsuccessfull, you fill seems to remain constant but that may just be the wall change in the background, move your H bars a little closer, don't highlight your outlines, just doesn't look right, especially when you already outlined the fill and they are in opposite areas

    Subconscious, I'm sorry but your letter structure is terrible, I don't see any bars and all of your letters are interconnected, your extensions seem meaningless, they seem to produce out of nothing, I had the same problem when I first started out and it is difficult to explain but to keep it short, don't use extension until you have the bare-bone basics down. Color choice is weak too. Sorry I know it sounds like candyland but you have to go back to 'start'. Believe me I thought the same thing, my old stuff looked just like that and I thought it was the shit but because I never went back the the basic bars I practically wasted 6-7 months.
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    reor make those letters way straighter..you'll learn how to bend them later..also dont woryry about your fill to much right now.

    soath make you letters the same size..and lose the little swoop thing.

    didn't really get to many critz on the last shit i posted but whatever....heres more


    tried some weird shit..not quite sure how im feeling about it

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    dope^, maybe bring that T in closer.

    reor... your can control is better than mine haha, pretty decent for a first piece.. the letters however need alot of work maybe sketch up a few straight letters
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    Quote Originally Posted by fonone View Post
    dope^...
    yeah i love that flick too. it has great composition.
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    i really like that piece tride, but i dunno about the bubbley stuff. i almost think it would have looked cooler with just straight lines. very nice piece though. and nice throw on the bridge too
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    whack, and about 3-4 weeks old haha.

    eww

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    i think its pretty damn fresh. the bottom of the e doesnt fit the top of it though
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    E and N are very straight while the Z and R are fluid
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    tride you got some relic e's

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    Lots of people use E's like that, its a simple E, even I use E's similar to that.
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    diggin it.
    i don't want a signature.

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    just ..
    In russia=)

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    In russia=)

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    lookin for some crits
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