Work on your throwy's SR and E.
Work on your throwy's SR and E.
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Just got started. Comments please.
wrong section fool
SORE, the throwie's pretty decent and simple was aiight, but that quote was seriously gay and corny as fuck
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Better?
this is for shit thats painted not on paper go to tot blackbooks
hahah
oh how do u guys get the image to pop up like that and not be in the attachment thing?
Sore that first throw is pretty cool, good letter structure.
I see its nice and big, covers the whole truck. Niceeeeee.
Is there a reason you did such a quick fill? Sketchy area?
The second one is pretty sick. Our S's look similar. I think thats cuz' they're basic.
But both your tags are good too, I've never tagged with Spray, I'll have to try that.
Good shit though man. Hit up my PM we'll trade black book pics.
Negatives-
Not too many, just your O looks like a lower-case b in the second throw.
(But I'm a toy, so disregaurd my negatives if you'd like) Stay up.
Last edited by Stray91; 01-19-2009 at 09:25 PM.
i wanted to piss of ges cus he capped me with that wack face so im burning him everywhere
nah that throwy's nice, maybe just keep working on the letters for the simple.
oh and drop the whole upside down cross thing, its becoming so played out its not funny
i shoulda sketched alot more..havent painted ina grip too so certain parts suck.. missed some 3d too but fucked around with dusting in it..
sketch is only about a week old..been to fuckin busy..
· ABN · ADC ·
Originally Posted by PeeInTheShower
make the S less covered by the C, and fix those white bling marks... looks horrible
alot better than how they used to be..overdosed on em
· ABN · ADC ·
Definitely need to fix the S and C...
and from one toy that sucks to another toy that's pretty good, (being you)
I think you should practice your 3D.
Some of the letters have it on their lower extensions and some don't.
the only letter than even came out decent was the n..i never said it was good.
its alot of progress than the last time i peiced though, so fuck it.
· ABN · ADC ·
frozen fingers suck
i know its a peice of shit but by the time i started doin my drop shadow my fingers couldnt push down on the nozel so i said
fuck it might end up goin back and fixing it
nice spot tho.
you're a jerk! i know. you're a jerk! i know.
put the S ontop of the C. watch your bar proportions, they flare in certain areas. keep your letters the same height. all the bars the same width to help balance it out (i.e. the bars on the E are a lot thinner than the C) take your time too, you can tell its rushed. rushing shit only grays your hair an gets a lousier result. the highlights on the left of your C on the inside of your S dont make sense. 3D is kinna fucked up on your E. try and make your outline one stroke rather than two or three. (hence the thicker line on your E) i woulda threw a forcefield on that. an i would chill on the stars an shit on the inside till you get clean straight lines down. cuz a nice fade would make it look a lot cleaner than the sloppy stars. work on your bubbles and fill them rather than just adding a black outline outside your shouts. the shines are aiight, work on em some more an they'll look better. id rack some paint and use a can just for straight lines and circles. it'll help a lot for shines; outlines, inlines, forcefield an all that shit. know what im super sayin? just keep piecing and it'll come. just like chess. no ones a grandmaster in a year or two.i shoulda sketched alot more..havent painted ina grip too so certain parts suck.. missed some 3d too but fucked around with dusting in it..
sketch is only about a week old..been to fuckin busy..
SORE i really like what im seein homie, straights an rooftops get my dick harrddd. your missing your 3D in many spots. namely the top of your letters. i can see your tryin a drop shadow. i wouldnt do that for straights, 3D looks a lot cleaner than a drop shadow on straights an pieces. your forgot your drop shadow on the inside of your E nonetheless. i would pick a much bolder forcefield color. probably woulda used that black. cuz i wouldnt have noticed a forcefield if it wasnt for the window. a thick outline woulda made that shit pop hard since you paint big. thin outlines on big letters are wack. all in all its a solid simple. keep sketchin for consistency an all that shit
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id say stik to paper
and fuck crews cus they bring unnesesary heat and snitches
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