Walls

[klic]

^exactly what i was trying to say

a coat of bucket paint helped a lot, i actually did a decent fill for the first time. to bad my outline sucked


mont - go simpler

[weakfingers]

Klic, Just use your fill colour and and go back and use cuts to smoothn out your lines with a thinner cap kinda like this but itill look way better in real life.

[DestinedtoPaintTLKnj]

I did 'grasp', my friend did the awkward city line under it..

constructive criticism?

[lord_plankton]

Heres what im at , not finished yet, obviously...mmmh goin to make the letters fit better together n stuff, too bad i ran outa paint...ill post when itz done

Destined- u shoulda work on letter structure, i mean the a is so displaced, the way it sits on the s, g too big . But i really like the highlights , not too bad , well the background idk, itz awkward. ur 3d is alright the black "speedlines in ur blocks are to much, just use em "wise", to make it look decent. go simple.

Mont , not bad 4 couple of month, 1rst one with the robot is good only the o is too fat, but still good, dont really get the "no" quote...help me out..

peace

[Anion]

Destined - I like it. I just think if you dripped the light pink down into the darker pink below it, it would give it more steady three dimensional look (Instead of dripping up). So all the lines are running down to the same vanishing point.

Mont I like your style. Don't listen to these jerks. Just keep it up.

[XXORtsald]

Klic, Just use your fill colour and and go back and use cuts to smoothn out your lines with a thinner cap kinda like this but itill look way better in real life.

nahh the K cant be tooo straight, that kills the whole throwy, throwys require curves.

[EST2007]

been in a funk, so it was good to get out while the weather's been nice. looking back i wish i didnt rush as much

[EST2007]

I did 'grasp', my friend did the awkward city line under it..

constructive criticism?

i love G's and ur G is pretty funky, i like it.

..however i'm not a big fan of the rest. if you're gonna take the time to do a a fill like that, where are the cuts? make that shit crisp, ya know?
not to mention you need to work on proportions too. and that R is hurtin.

and throw a halo on that shit.

[EST2007]

cool use of space, man. letters arent that bad

[-Sinn-]

[Messer]

^exactly what i was trying to say

a coat of bucket paint helped a lot, i actually did a decent fill for the first time. to bad my outline sucked


mont - go simpler

are you holding the can at an angle?

[milk boxx]

shitty cell phone flick

[klic]

are you holding the can at an angle?

i dont remember haha, should i be?

[Mr yarbles]

You need to b ack up a bit klic it would help with the drips.
Or go faster.

emek your piece was alright but you need to stop covering letters

[thedudeman]

a quick simple on da freeway

[JustChillin]

learn bars

[thedudeman]

[weakfingers]

Emek, that shit is looking pretty good, I love the fill

cool use of space, man. letters arent that bad

Thanks alot man, Things at that park are all the big writers in the scene so i gotta stick to the small spots.

[-Sinn-]

[Fury]

Fresh shit, but don't make your E invade the V like that. I also don't like your E that much, but take it or throw it out (the advice).