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    new page, nothin to crit... I'll crit anyone who crits me, I don't hate, I'm just honest...





    edit: digging the vader..especially the second one.. good clean style, but i agree with whoever.. the force field should be tight with as few stops and as many crisp corners as possible
    also diggin the wers stuff,
    the sore stuff looks familiar, what was your tag before?
    Last edited by URACRU_2; 08-17-2009 at 07:26 PM.

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    make the bars the same size and the letters about the same size.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlacktodaFuture View Post
    make the bars the same size and the letters about the same size.
    word, i had trouble keeping the can the same distance from the surface, so it got wavy in size...

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    just practice, do some more black book sketches, and take it to a bigger surface, go under a bridge or something like that to practice.
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    Nice work. Just maybe change the color of the highlight in the top picture. Or the crack. I know what exactly you were going for. Maybe outline the body of the letters and drop shadow in black to differentiate between the cracks and the highlights.

    That's all I got.

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    Fucked up the outline on the middle left part of the Pudge E, whatever.

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    Started as a throw. Ended up as a little piece all by itself.

    First time I've worked this word. The word is 'Harve'.

    I want it to be easy to read by non-writers who may see it in the future.

    All Molotow. Used an Orange to draw the initial outline and fill with Grapefruit. I used a GO2 for all the bright stuff inside. Outlined and shadowed with NYF. Highlights with GO2. Pink dot for the background, but again used the GO2 for the bubbles.

    I'm already unhappy with the lower corner of the H. It was an awkward angle for my hand when I came around so I kicked it kinda' sideways, hence the misty spray. Hmm, what else... I kinda' fudged the drop shadow at the bottom of the E a little. It comes to a little point and it should be rounder to match the outline of the letters. I wasn't gonna' put the horizontal lines on the bars of the H but my friend said it looked like an X. Im not sure what to do about that yet. I tried to do this work at a medium pace. I'm trying to pick up the pace a little cause I've been taking too long under highway bridges and that aint good. All in all, took about an hour. Stopping for a few minutes to let some parts dry and shake some cans here and there.

    Looking for crits on stuff I am yet unaware of. Looking for crits on the 'H' issue.
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    stencil.

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    looks good lamb, maybe try 2 layer with 3d?


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    RGB.
    nice and consistant - they all similar but try grouping the R a bit closer cause you can seeit drifting further away from the G.
    Im not too fond of the R tbh try tweaking it a bit to give it a unique look.

    Sore.
    That shits tight man. keep it up. What paint you using?

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    anion... overall looks good. I would keep the horizontal lines on the H.. They look fine, and your friend was right, without em it'd look like an X.. I think the E is almost too rounded on the top.. E's are hard, trust me, I know :-).....just maybe try goin just a little less round. The only other thing i found to comment on were the "holes" in the A and R... I would try something different than what u got goin on, cuz the fade out at the bottom of the lines doesn't fit the rest...
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    Thanks URACRU 2.

    Totally agree about the flared lines on the A and R. I'm gonna' work on those and that E today. I might just try some regular straight lines for now. Keep it simple.

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    i'm so wack




    rgb - dope, its unique, your gonna get a lot of attention from it cause it really stands out

    lamb - stencil thread

    queezy - blackbook thread

    anion - get photobucket

    hipe - top ones best, keep your letters a consistant size
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    Did that wall absorb you paint?

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    yep

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    I hate that, I think it would be better without the tiny E and the big K.
    Other than that the JAN look good.

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    thanks man, i was going to do a normal E but i was running out of paint and i didnt want to risk running out of paint halfway through a big E. and i have no clue why my K is rediculously big lol

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    Haha, I wish there were chill random walls in my area.
    You should use the back of the wall to practice, and buff it so it doesnt absorb paint.

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    ive hit the back of the wall a couple months ago, but now its all grown in and covered in thorns and shit. i live in the middle of nowhere so every wall is a chill wall haha

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    Looking good Klic. I always love seeing what you're gonna' post next...

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