SOme oldies
Old..........SIMPS
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ok where to start
with the 3D you really shoulda put the lines connecting corners to the bottom, rather than having it all solid pale purple... it has no definition at the moment
a keyline always helps pieces pop like crazy, maybe in this case i would have used that same pink that you used for the bits in the fill
again, highlights help pieces pop like crazy. you'd be surprised how much of a difference they make, its worth the extra effort.
the top part of the S doesn't line up at all, it goes from thin to thick for no reason.
think thats all for now, just trying to give you a bunch of helpful crits.
its really bad, but whatever here goes
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Mase :: like y letters but I'd work on your 3d and defo go with a forcefield
Freestyle in the local shop, think I like these s's better than my normal ones, crits plz
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damn yo thats ill
Mase- looks good but yea get the lines goin in the 3d
Snot- looks dope but the 3d could be a bit cleaner
heres my throwies...
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