take my advice for once and simplyfy your fill ins aaand letters.
looks like you try too hard.
naaaah fiddling around with the fill colors and whatnot is all good... just the 3D I don't fully agree on, but still, it's can control practice, the fill stuff is good for that
it's the letters themselves that need work
i really like those green with the pink, the 3d kinda distracts.
n thanks, i keep it to pen, decos, and pad mostly.. my can control seem terrible outlines especially
so that's why i go out.
got a question if i use the structure in last picture and fix the I, and give it a drop shadow, would that be heading in the right direction?
and obvious proportion and control
I'm new to graff so I don't know if this will be too helpful, but here are my 2 cents on what needs improvement.
Make sure your fills are consistent throughout. Work on your 3d (i.e. make sure they are all pointing straight to the vanishing point, not curving towards it). The extension on your T makes it almost look like a G so be careful. And some of you white highlights look shaky, but I guess that just takes practice and can control. I like your lettering, but some of the extensions look wack.
excuses: 1- did this in pitch black darkness. 2- steel door + dollar cans = drips
Me in the white, red, and black(the Lettering)... Tross with the characters and spashes...
Mone with the sickness.
This was my first ever attempt at a straight letter, and half way through it got really dark, so i forgot some of the purple, but whatever, no excuses. just gonna practice these more.
This also happened, first roller
this photo's making me dizzy, what were you standing on the ceiling?
it looks like 2 walls on the corner of each other... or is that roller on the ground?
thiose yellow dots are wierd
Dont paint much. did this today tho.. any crits?
stay off freights for a while.