looking good as always 3RD, and for some reason im really feeling that R
looking good as always 3RD, and for some reason im really feeling that R
lots of little short strokes...try to do a line in one motion. proportions kinda off. to me it all looks kinda forced...Originally Posted by MoganOne
i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is
3rd i like the peice but the throw in the throwie work on that 3 and youll be number one in this thread
bump2011
some feedback would be nice
mone - that m is sick, it does look a little forced though
3rd - I like that piece. the 3 in the throwie looks a bit weird tho
ism - start with simples
3rd, keep doing what you're doing. Work on can control a little bit, get used to that throw, and eventually you'll get bored with it and add little bits of steez. I see huge things in your future if you keep that shit up.
Your stuff is coming out pretty legit bro
I could list excuses, but I'm just gonna say I'm not happy with it. Gotta practice painting more.
Mone lookin real good as usual, skin headin in the right direction.
edit- i just noticed my boys unfinished 3d haha. the sun came up so we had to split before we got seen.
This is my first throw with this name so it's not the best.
This weekends batch.
Missing the left bar on the M of the bottom one. (ran out of green, just got another can to finish with tho)
Flat you're better than me so take this for what its worth but I think you need to work on your spacing, lots of random negative space in your pieces
Last edited by PermanentMarkers; 04-18-2011 at 07:43 PM.
FLAT - Too much negative space, I don't like your extensions, L is mad far from that A.
ADMIN - I don't like the top one, but that A in the bottom is good. Your D is a little skinny though.
SAGE - that name is hella overused. Anyway, your G looks like a C, take off the highlights, make it two colors, work on the structure.
3RD - Pretty good, I like that throw.
Yeah the D is skinny for sure, I ran out of green, thats why the M doesnt have a left bar, it was getting real dark and i went over it with the forcefield without realizing it...
Yo Fury that A is probably the first letter that i've been stoked on after i transfer it to the wall... When i sketch i usually start by finding an A style that i like, and copying the bars from the A for my other bars.... I feel like i've hit a plateau, maybe its due to this? Should i maybe try to do the A, M and N similar style, with a different-ish style for the D and I?
yeah i know its over used. i did this on a bridge that will most likely never get seen. i just wanted to practice painting a bit. thanks for the crits though.
You can always just draw all the letters separately, find some styles you like and then branch off from there. If you ever get stuck, just throw in some random curves and see where it takes you.
just painted this
work on your S a little more make it look more like an S and i dont know whats with them white lines on the g and e.
This is my first throw with this name so it's not the best.
i like what u do with your fill but your letters still need work and as others have said theres too much space between the letters.
is that in ur backyard? haha, i like it except for the P and colours u chose other than that its okay.
just painted this
mase that S is fire yo
@smokeitup lol nah its in my home boys yard
@eclectic thanks yo
heres a day time flik
it's a shame that I had to use shit paint on a shit paint eater wall to do my 60th piece:
If that's all the style you've got to show for your 60th painted piece, you should go back to your letter structure. Seriously. Your extensions are wack, your proportions are fucking way off, the way you flare your bars aren't consistent and don't look good, and REALLY don't compliment each letter. All your arrows make your piece look shittier. and that triple quote thing is super lame.
Honesty.
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