Walls

**asf561** · 10-14-2011 09:36 PM

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This is my third piece. Any suggestions much appreciated!

toopski · 10-14-2011 10:12 PM

Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall

Homie. These fools are legit famous. You've never heard of Optimist DE? Known and recognized worldwide. He could do a drunken, illegible tag, and you'd STILL know who did it.

u say known worldwide yet im sure over half the countries in the world never heard of him, i dont worry about people from other countries with the same letters for a crew obviously theres more then one DE in america alone

**ribcage** · 10-15-2011 12:38 AM

the fill is real bad, and so are the letters. The D looks like a bad K, and it lloks like there is a lower case L attached to your B. The 3d is off, and you got some wacky bar widths in some spots(top left of E, and in the two bend in the T). You should bring down the top right part of the U lower, so the cross on your T can fit
in there a little more snug. As for cleaniliness its dirty, the lines are all choppy, you need to cut your lines after you finish the outline.

**Strange Journeys** · 10-15-2011 12:56 AM

damn i suck

**ribcage** · 10-15-2011 01:05 AM

its deifnetly a step up though, just keep goin. you shouldnt trip off the fill for now, you shoulda just used black and the light grey with a red or the dark grey outline cause the red and dark grey next to eachother dont pop

toopski · 10-15-2011 01:06 AM

everyone starts somewhere

**asf561** · 10-15-2011 01:09 AM

By "EAZY" were you referring to my post? Or was there another in here called EAZY? Cause that is supposed to be an L

**Strange Journeys** · 10-15-2011 01:17 PM

oh, that straight up looks like an E, not an L, work on that

thanks for the crits guys

**SneeZ** · 10-15-2011 01:43 PM

Supposed to be KVN, turned out looking like RUN. shit man. ran out of paint, couldent finish the shadow. Fill is made with roller. Its bad and im struggling with can control. Human on the right side to see the size. Anything else?

**ribcage** · 10-15-2011 01:49 PM

shadow on you U is fucked

**MyNipsAreHard** · 10-15-2011 04:01 PM

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SneeZ- pretty big. props to that. but you need to work on letter structure
Crits on this one.. first timer right heree

**ribcage** · 10-15-2011 04:13 PM

why you take a picture of a throwie? anyways, paint it a hundred more times and itll look better

**Phillip McDougall** · 10-15-2011 06:36 PM

I hope that doesn't say Block

**MyNipsAreHard** · 10-15-2011 08:18 PM

Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall

I hope that doesn't say Block

...why

**Phat 2** · 10-16-2011 01:13 AM

coz he has a weird illness where he gets a diharrea whenever he reads the word "block"... i dunno why... he's weird

**ribcage** · 10-16-2011 01:19 AM

lmao, phat actually made a funny joke, the apocalypse is coming

**MyNipsAreHard** · 10-16-2011 03:46 PM

Derk- you should keep sketching those for a lil while longer. the R and K need some work.

**Z3BRA** · 10-16-2011 03:59 PM

mkay

DERK.ONE · 10-16-2011 04:27 PM

Originally Posted by MyNipsAreHard

Derk- you should keep sketching those for a lil while longer. the R and K need some work.

yea theyre mad basic ive been tryin to get more style in my letters ill keep drawing n see what i can come up with tho Thanks for the critic most dudes on these forums just bash ppls shit n tell them to stop trying to write. thers no love on here lol