Walls

**snoketg** · 01-03-2012 01:08 AM

just got up in my back yard, crits?

**MiDo93** · 01-03-2012 05:00 PM

snoketg you need to clean that up, its toooooo sloppy. Like with the bottom part of the S, make it just overlap out lining the whole letter doesnt give it that clean look. Also i cant really make out the last letter, is it an E or a G?

**malto** · 01-03-2012 09:23 PM

sorry for shitty flick of the second one it was on a roof couldnt walk back any further. first time painting in a longgggggg time.

**Fang** · 01-03-2012 09:33 PM

Malto, ur letters are wayy to far apart, and the second pic is shitty.

**gemer** · 01-03-2012 09:38 PM

Originally Posted by lostyoursense

http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/6611206471/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/7152135...n/photostream/

Advise?

doppeeee shitt man

**snoketg** · 01-04-2012 01:06 AM

its an e but thanks for the feedback ill clean it up

**Skadeem** · 01-05-2012 09:59 AM

Sense that's great shit! Veko I think your throws would improve if you found a better e and went skinny and tall more like the second, that's a preference of mine though

I can't decide if I should be that guy and say sake is on top in Montreal.....but who really gives a fuck as long as you don't paint in the same places.

**snal** · 01-05-2012 10:42 AM

thanks for the crits skad...i would made it taller but there was nowhere to step and i decided to make it like that.So today i came with the idea to paint in my training construction...bad idea -10 degrees in the mist felt like even more cold..This is the result of my first piece ever
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i don't like it at all it has many mistakes but practice makes perfection.

toopski · 01-05-2012 11:06 AM

Originally Posted by MiDo93

snoketg you need to clean that up, its toooooo sloppy. Like with the bottom part of the S, make it just overlap out lining the whole letter doesnt give it that clean look. Also i cant really make out the last letter, is it an E or a G?

its a throwie man some ppl like that look on throws

**Phillip McDougall** · 01-05-2012 11:25 AM

No, it's actually sloppy. Your outlines shouldn't be sloppy because you should be used to doing this motion over and over again.

**malto** · 01-05-2012 06:34 PM

Originally Posted by Skadeem

I can't decide if I should be that guy and say sake is on top in Montreal.....but who really gives a fuck as long as you don't paint in the same places.

Im from australia so no problem there.

VEKO - I like it for a nice simple. work on your 3D/shadow though, i like that K but it doesnt fit in with the other letters cause the bars are skinnier. good work though

**snal** · 01-05-2012 07:16 PM

Originally Posted by malto

Im from australia so no problem there.

VEKO - I like it for a nice simple. work on your 3D/shadow though, i like that K but it doesnt fit in with the other letters cause the bars are skinnier. good work though

thanks man,preciate the crits...couse its my first piece i hate

but i will try to improve if i got the money(the only missing part).I work out how to combine the k and the o couse they do not fit everytime i put em togheter.Any suggestions on that?

**SkateJunt** · 01-05-2012 10:01 PM

any crits on my new tag?

Picture 182 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

**Kid Samurai** · 01-06-2012 04:41 AM

toopski · 01-06-2012 11:11 AM

Originally Posted by malto

Im from australia so no problem there.

VEKO - I like it for a nice simple. work on your 3D/shadow though, i like that K but it doesnt fit in with the other letters cause the bars are skinnier. good work though

another aussie boy on the forums nice