Walls

[toopski]

its clean atleast but structure needs a lil work and extensions need alotta work

[PETER]

phat : The arrow on the left should be something else. if it wasn't for some of the extensions some of the letters would be lacking. I believe it says relik. the I looks like a tiny y. the bit to the left has to go. he needs to work out an I that fills the dead space. The curved bit of the k doesn't fit the rest of the piece.

[canteen green]

phat dont listen to them that shit looks hella tough keep it up

[canteen green]

but i do agree that the fill coulda been less plain

[gemer]

@est2007 im diggen that thumbs up

[toopski]

i was taught to always rack everything, when i paint with someone who pays for paint, it usually gives me an uneasy feeling. If someone cant steal paint how am i suppose to trust them as a partner in crime? AND i wouldnt have half the ups i do if i had to pay for it...

move to where i live and try racking 90% of places have all the spray paint caged then what ya gonna do aye?

i always get to know the peeps i paint with before anything only one mate of mine i just met up with and went bombing

[Phat 2]

phat dont listen to them that shit looks hella tough keep it up

dude, do us all a favor (including yourself) and keep your toy comments to yourself for now... you'll one day know what you're talking about. your crits will one day be valid. hope for the best

[Mori]

Phat, I notice he sticks most his connections at the end of a leg to a letter, and in some cases he has extensions on either side of the same bar, this throws off the balance of the letters. Furthermore, although I can tell he tried to balance the piece with some unique letter placement with that I, but none of the letters interact, and with that many extensions I am sure he could have found a better use of that space with some clever connections between a few of those letters. In this way it appears stiff. And if your gonna finish off a piece with extensions like those arrows, you need to balance it on the other side

[after]

crites

[SONE.]

Yo.

[Shit Outta Luck]

Thats a hella dope spot ^

[H1P30N3R]

hell yea props on that man can u zoom in on the throws ?

[Dossbog]

This was the first time I ever used spraypaint......

[SONE.]

Here's the close up. It was kinda an awkward spot to get done so excuse my wack handsteeze.

[smokeitup]

howd u do that sone?

[aaesoo]

yeah really lol that's an intense fucking spot.

[hellbilly31]

[Big Africa]

Critz Por favor

[MiDo93]

Big Africa dont use a light color for the outline if you have light colors in the fill, it will make it look wack most of the time. Stay away from the x's and try not to fade your stuff yet, work on your font

[tophaa]

Critz please, I know that the first one's O is kinda whack.
Thanks.