Walt your OT is ok, but the E has a dick in its mouth and the S is wack. Lose the split part on top of the E and S, thicken up the S, and try straight bars on the top and bottom of the E.
Walt your OT is ok, but the E has a dick in its mouth and the S is wack. Lose the split part on top of the E and S, thicken up the S, and try straight bars on the top and bottom of the E.
nice diggen the name change up for the threads
@ dekode did you do both of those peices? also y did you go over that other dude do u have beef with him just curious?
@walt it all looks like different styles each letter haha and is that an e' cuz it looks like a g' in a wway and if its a g' it kinda looks like an e' haha but keep sprayin man
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i dont think youll ever be ready, sport. i wouldnt be handin out critisicm in your situation. thats for shhhhuuuuuurrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee........Originally Posted by killroywashere
@Big africa - make your R more like your 3. and wait to paint. i dont think you and your boys are ready yet
crits?
dude this is a mad burner!!!!
don't cross womp again or you've made everyone's shitlistA wall that me and my homies hit
i know my r is a lil too long and my letter consistancy is off but critz anyway.
You need to learn who's who
Dank, I'm digging the style. I would work on your R though, on the bottom right leg, try to make it like the bottom of the S, and knock out that extension the other way. I think that symmetry would be dope.
Man my throwie on that shit is sad. Fuck running out of paint.
Last edited by Phat 2; 02-20-2012 at 05:20 PM.
i used to, it was an old piece and there was no where else i could piece
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Damn dude that other one is better than your new stuff in my opinion.
dkode you needa stop painting and start sketching more work on your bars theyre all inconsistent, but that old white piece is better than the green and blue one.
@mori -
chill out champ
your going to get at me for critting oreo?
oh yah heres how you do a bomb
straight lines and whatnot
im fucking with a few names cut me a break homie
^^ Oreo isn't stepping out of his boundaries, which looks whack. Go back to barring it up like many of us man. Too early to be trying stylized pieces. just my opinion.
i know what you mean
but style is funner than bars in my opinion
i like to go with the flow
rather than be worryed about random errors that dont really matter to me
i can see what you mean about working with bars tho
might give it a shot on my next one
thought i'd give ya'll a taste of some next level shit I've come across in my wide internet travels
Womp is everywhere dude...went to an abandoned mental institution...womp's been on the roof. Twice. Fucking crazy.
And Phil that's bangin indeed ^
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
this is the walls thread!! not the van thread!! if it was still tot bombs and pieces/ paint only it would be fine!!
we need a thread for every possible surface now
Yeah I feel you, you can still put style on bars. It doesn't have to be all blocky and shit. The point in the recognize the structure of the letter. You can flare out and add shit while doing bars. Just don't go to crazy.
Going through a name change right now and it is not fun.
^^ that one is better than the others. Work with that N a little bit. Tuck that bitch in all nice and symmetric like.
Killroywashere@ im sorry man but that ish is trash. you need more foundation. id be crossing your shit out erryday if you lived in my city and was painting that kinda trash on my rocks(whats up with that in the first place? are there no walls where you live?) just work on straight letters man.
i can see what you mean i guess
that would be why im in the toy forum
i just like to paint bro
racking, painting, finding spots, all that shit
haha i got spots but most are under bridges
it gets tough when its winter out and you gotta stand in freezing water
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