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    ^^its not bad, the bar on the to of the N is a bit big, so I would slim that down, but it's actually pretty good.
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    Thank you sah. Yeah I lost the good lines I laid out when I filled in my letters. The m is a bit too small on that second leg. I fixed it, or attempted to like twice but to no avail.

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    A lot things are fucked up in that, Emune, but your can control is not bad.

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    My 3d is pretty shotty. Hit me with what errors you see so I can correct them next time. I'm slowly getting better with high pressure cans like rusto and painters touch. I feel like I've learned more can control using high pressured paint than I did using low pressure. Just hard to get clean lines with those cap adapters sometimes >_>

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    Absolutely!^ When you are learning to play guitar, you should get an acoustic because they are a bit more difficult to play, you have to press hard, resonance can sound more off than with an electric. So once you get the acoustic down, you can shred with an electric. Same basic principle as with cans, if you can still find krylon cans (i can only get chromes) without the fan, they are a good teaching, they progress can control and speed.
    I also agree about the adapters, soft lines from every cap.

    Aside from that, the piece looks good, but since you asked here is what I see wrong.
    -The E's are a close enough match, no worries there, but, I would make the top left bump more blocky or the bottom left less blocky
    -The right leg on your M is the thinnest part of the piece making, adding far too much to the U (fattest part)
    -The right of the U has too much going on
    -Top of N is too big
    -The bottom 3d is ok. Inside the letters is rather disproportionate.
    -It may just be the photo, but the quotations are an after-thought to me. I would lose them next time

    I like it though, if I saw it out I would take a sec to look and not have anything shitty to say.

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    hit me wit sum crits too yo, i did the dollahs, the seyar pieces(obviously lol) and culture.

    emune- u jus gotta work on consistency, looks good overall
    nap- pretty sick, would like to see more

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    Its just your letters in general. They're just pretty ugly. Have a lot of weird random bars like on the left leg of your M and the Right side of your U. And your bar consistency is weak. You'd get way more respect if you just did more simple stuff with your can control. Hopefully you didn't go over some old head's roller this time too lol.

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    Sey, I think those pieces just have too much going on for the most part, you keep it pretty simple which I like, looks like a legal with all the purple fill, so whatever but Your letters don't stand on their own and the fill takes away from that. Fruit salad.

    But at least you aren't nuts on the extensions and you love to paint obviously. stay up!

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    I've been sketching for years but it's taken me forever to start painting and now i'm hooked
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    that white paint sucked

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    Drippy...
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    the white didnt suck but you suck

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    Quote Originally Posted by R3bel1995 View Post
    Drippy...
    I have to asume something was wrong with the can, I didn't get any drips on the blue or black but the white was spazing.

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    the white didnt suck but you suck
    if you say so.

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    I say so cause you gotta know that you must practice more and more too get can control with the dollacans

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    true, still learning a lot

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    Quote Originally Posted by SENOone View Post
    I've been sketching for years but it's taken me forever to start painting and now i'm hooked
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    that white paint sucked
    i wouldnt work with a gel like you did with that blue, not until you can make smooth enough lines consistently to outline something other then a solid blob of a fill without going inside or outside of where the line should lay. if that makes sense. you gotta develope your muscles in your arm to the point where they have memorized the movements.
    youll start to notice certain movements will feel more comfortable and you can work around those

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    never blame the paint
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    true that^
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    fucked up the M and many other places, didn't have more cans to fix up.
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    @ dank - digging that, not so into the bar going through the O, just looks weird to me since the bottom of the O curves up like that.

    @ mone - looks killer, love the fill on the O, don't dig the mad extension on the N, could make it look like a jacked P - but youre way beyond taking shitty crits from me, looks great. dig the outline-ish tag in the E.


 

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