those clouds are tight
1st attempt at a simp pretty wack but Ill evolve
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^ looks decent, O is kinda off and looks like some of ur bar width isnt the exact same but it looks good...i like the color combo you used 2. i gotta attempt a straight letter soon here
Emune- needs to be cleaned up abit but still looks decent, i like your U the most. try it again with trying to make ur bar width more or so the same
Last edited by Kaze; 04-29-2012 at 03:16 PM.
@ mori yea i think that was the first painted flic i posted on here but thanks man...and i had fat caps that came with the cans i had
@ emune good call man it was fresh paint lol and thanks for the tips my dude
Crits? I think I posted this before but I dont think it went through
@Hipe, not bad for first simp piece. Simps are surprisingly difficult, so don't be discouraged. It's a lot harder to lay out a wall with even bars than it is on paper, as many of the black book dick riders do not realize. I compliment your brave selection of letters man. K's are fun, but O's are a bit tricky, and that blank space from the P and R is difficult. I'm not hating on your name, but giving you props for taking on it's challenge. Keep up that good spirit.
@Irony, Thanks my dude, I will work on the bars again, I usually rush my sketches so that I can paint them haha. I'll probably stick with that flow and keep working with it (other than throwies I haven't painted the same style twice, mostly because I didn't really use bars when I first got in the game.)
@Norf, thanks mang, I kinda fucked up on a few of them, it was getting dark and I was tired of the wood dwelling hobo that sat behind me the whole time I painted this, thank God big africa and my other boy were there with me.
@Kaze, Thank you, I will improve it next time after I sketch it up a few mo'gins.
@Gemer, anytime man, and btw, is that fresh good? It looks ridiculously high pressure on the videos I watch, not to mention is sounds like a fucking jet engine being sprayed, and it has a weird matte/plasticy looking finish. I've contemplated ordering some before, and it sells out so fast, so I often wonder if it is good, or just really cheap. I know it's not even comparable to mtn or ironlak, but in comparison to other paints you've used how do you like it? Such as rusto or painters touch
@blackmath, I like it dude. I saw you mention when you posted that you wanted a unique throwie and props to the straights. Your can control is alright, but that will get better with time, looks like shitty paint, but theres no reason to buy highquality, you'll learn more with mid line high pressure paint such as rusto (just get a few cap adapters and some ny fats.) The K branches are too small in my opinion, so work on that k, also your T is overlapping the A (as it should,) but your A is going behind your K, so work on that and fix it next time. I see you ran out of paint? Outlining in a different color than the fill makes the piece looks a million times better so keep that in mind, and if that is chrome, you must have located some old krylon or HQ paint because in my experience rusto chrome or any other brand chrome isn't worth shit. Try to flow that K upwards at the same angle as the T and A.
Last edited by uknowigetup; 04-29-2012 at 04:23 PM.
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
So I did end up goin out that night but none of my sketches came out remotely good so I just ended up doin my old shit hahah, still workin on the sketches though. I feel like my letters are gettin better though and more along what Im trying to go for. What you guys think?
Not the cleanest but I had to stand on a ledge and my body was literally two inches away from the wall
Heres a better picture, shows the size much better
@ youknowigetup i like the chrome of fresh paint they turn out real nice but they do have like a plastic like finish to them
Tak u k is to skinny where the bars connect.
And every pic u got you go over someone
Soooo whats so wrong with goin over someone? thats part of the game son. Anyway it was my buddy's and he was puttin up new shit right next to me lol
But thanks for the advice man Ill def keep that in mind
Last edited by blackmath; 05-01-2012 at 12:39 AM.
tak a little advice find a chill spot to paint over and over like I have.
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Nah man Im sayin like if theres a wall thats completely covered, you cant expect someone to not go over someone elses shit, especially if its all shitty throw ups. If you really need that one throw to not be covered, you need to get up more. I dont go over shit thats better than mine, if thats what you mean. I pick the shittiest spot on the wall
Derk looks good but the D is I lil small
@ Derk looks dope, i'm feelin your flow, just make that D biggier and keep rockin that ish
Derk- try flipping the top bar of the E. Like, its frowny right now, so make a smile type line nahmean. Real funky type shit tho, I like.