says debut, your bars coming off the tops of the F, E and A gotta go, and i would lose the bends in the letters as well
and yeah good point, the bar in the U was supposed to balance it with the E but i made it too skinny, and i gotta figure out a way to do something with the T
Debut- I see the style youre goin for and I like that youve developed your own, but your letters need to be good to pull it off. The E and T are the best looking, but that B isnt even legible. Keep at it man, itll be dope with some improvements.
also in case you didnt notice yet you missed some 3d on the inside of the D.
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thanks dude, i appreciate it, and yeah i noticed that and some other flaws after. Ill keep working on the B, but to be honest i like that you kinda lose the letters ya know?Originally Posted by Norfsuthr
i suck
^ dude stop wasting paint and sketch, ur letters need a lot of work.
The one outside on brown wall looks best. Still sucks, ur O's are wack calm them down
yea i know thanks for the advice i was being real quick with with shitty paint on the white walls
lol real quick it what a throw is designed for you draw it a million times it becomes muscle memory... after you get a decent throw going.
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@Axil
Practice man, and then when you start to see letter bars in your sleep, sketch some more. And then paint. I'm not going to say to not paint, but work on your letters before you go out and take unnecessary risks. I once painted whack shit like that, just progress with your sketches, and then paint them. But make sure it's worth painting. Can control is just as important and letter structure, so don't just stick to the coloring books like a lot of the people on the blackbooks thread.
@Negativity
Dont post pictures of yourself, this isn't a b boy photo shoot. Police do troll these threads.
@Goober
Work with bars, and stick with the bubbles. Start off my drawing square boxes on a page, and set them beside each other. Then proceed to fill in said squares with your letters. You're all over the place but at least you are humble.
police dont troll they lurk. dips hit
not diggen it first time painting this year
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i like it gemer.
gemer looks like you just need to use a thin cap for your outline .
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The bottom of the M is a bit short and it coulda been cleaner.
Not me...but its a the evicted crack house, my homi painted it
[QUOTE=uknowigetup;1792594]@Axil
Practice man, and then when you start to see letter bars in your sleep, sketch some more. And then paint. I'm not going to say to not paint, but work on your letters before you go out and take unnecessary risks. I once painted whack shit like that, just progress with your sketches, and then paint them. But make sure it's worth painting. Can control is just as important and letter structure, so don't just stick to the coloring books like a lot of the people on the blackbooks thread.[QUOTE]
Once painted whack shit like that? Incase i missed something big, im pretty sure you didnt become god overnight. And im pretty sure its still not that great even if u did improve. Id rather see okay sketches in the bbook thread for a while than terrible crack baby pieces that make my eyes throw up everyday. All in all, I say stick to books for a while until you got some dope stuff down.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Ran outta paint...couldn't finish cleaning it up.
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Ever heard of a fucking mop?
what you need is to do cutbacks on that shitnot diggen it first time painting this year
Critz please, through this piece together like 20 minutes before painting it, so my letter structure is pretty shitty. Especially the damn n, which always gives me hell. I really just wanted to paint this new e that I've been toying with. Other than that, my letters here are pretty fugly. Sorry for the reflection, there is a lamp post right behind this wall, so taking pictures at night is difficult.
@Mildstyle, I'm not claiming to be hot shit, but when I first started writing, I would impulsively paint, and that shit would like quite a bit like axils.
Apparently mtn gold pink is basically transparent, that's the last time I'll use that ish.
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