Sio some are alright. Those weird lines running down some of the O's I would lose. Also when doing a throw in a spot that's seen from far away, like the loOks of that roof top. I would use a thicker cap to outline. You would be able to read it from further.
Tak - I like how you fixed you K. Everything is nice and proportioned.
Once you feel you got that down, I would say progress some more style into it. Also maybe try adding lInes in your 3d
Nodrips. I think you should tone down the style a bit. Do something more simple and work on proportions