rave:i think this one looks a lot better than your last postbut i think it ll look much better if u would make your letters less blocky, make the legs of the r the same size and fix the middle of the e...
dawz:looks good again
minz:im feelin those hollows on the 5th pic and the last picture looks good to don`t you have a picture of that one filled in or didn`t you finished tha one..?
wiley:looks allright but im not really feelin the e and needs a lil work oln the forcefield/shadow
failone:1st one looks sick, ilike the 2nd one to but im not really feelin the forcefield on top..
orgasm:not really feelin it but i can`t make characters myself so shouldnt be givin you crits..
blunttokes:looks good
(done in 60 seconds with a almost empty can of terror and a super fatcap)
^^^ yo desire those r dope im loving that last 1
n that "piece" type thing was done way b4 my last throwie i posted lol
the throw is my newest ish
ut i dun have a cam so they r all old as pics or sum1 elses
n blunttokes work on the consistency 4 thickness in ur letters on the 2 color fill
but thats prolly the best thing ive seen come outta u
nice rber shout lol
Last edited by rave905; 02-17-2008 at 10:21 AM.
Yee word up i feel the same way, never seen a peice of his that ive liked, he talked mad shit for the battle n i pretty much torched him so yeeOriginally Posted by Scream Out
what do u mans think of this mother
first shot at that style
n i know the a is 2 small
its relly bumpy n swampy there n i kept tripping
Yo fail, liken the style but try to make a litle bit more letter distinction, it will pop more.
"Hiphops in my blood, it runs through my veins, and into my heart, and pumps out in the form of art."
this is my latest peice, i personally think its better than all the others..
crits?
desire: that second one is sick.im lovin those colors.
rave:try spacing your letters closer together, and try to get them to flow more.start off simple and further develope it.
Last edited by shie-ster; 02-17-2008 at 01:26 PM.
ehhhh...
you know how i do
SEIZE UR EVOLVING into sumthing dope!
what do u mans think of this mother
first shot at that style
n i know the a is 2 small
its relly bumpy n swampy there n i kept tripping
tighten them together no wat i mean?
n keep it up home boy
holy fuck!!!! lucky!!
dank!!!
fresh.ehhhh...
you know how i do
we gotta work on your handy.
roal i liek the top one its pretty fresh.
seize - that bottom pic is dope
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we? sounds good.
gimme something to work with?
always crushing shitehhhh...
you know how i do
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any helpful advice?
been painting for about 3months now. so..
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wow.
reaaaaaaaaaal bad.
go back to simples dude.
Kc writers PM me.
Ehh.. keep trying..been painting for about 3months now. so..
As for your colours, I'd say try to fade it a bit more. Instead of just fading it straight on (if you get what i mean),
About 1/3 of your letter should be faded, and instead of using just the 2 colours, use 3 or more to fade it. (ex... red, orange, yellow instead of red and yellow)
etc...
i would say that u both need to stop wasting ur paint and start sketching i dont mean to be harsh but yeah ur letters are wak. when u do the shine dont out line it cause then i doent look like shine. and dont fill it inamd make it so fat just do a circle in the middle then put lines through it
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^preaty proud of this^^^^^^^^
any critzz
Last edited by Teez-EmM!!!; 02-18-2008 at 05:19 PM.
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reaaaaaaallll quick.
sloppy but new throw?
the last one looks like vezm.^^^^^^^^^^
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