SIKE SEID AEVER
Hoer- thats a nice burner
Resp- You been rockin that steez for a min...Think its time for change? IMO
Sike-Nice ups but as far as the sketch Im not diggin all the extra stuff going on in thier.
Seid-Keep at its its clean good job
(post pics in a min)
sike and seid hench shit love both of your stuff
does this deserve intermediate status? if not ill go back to the toy thread with it:
Someone ask what Im workin with today so here. Nothin good just bitting, cause I can do shit
^^^^Simp for Seyo
^^^Some stuff in the book
Last edited by (SoS)Viruz; 10-14-2009 at 09:43 PM.
hoer - sick. like the fill.
viruz - some good letters, some not as good. keep er up.
eng - bars more consistent pls. and id say toy forum for now.
pencil lines were possible extensions.
sike- your throws are pretty decent man i lie kthe color combo on the 2nd
hoer- looks good jsut seems lie kthe ends went a lil over board with arrows.
Zome- your definatly improoving bud but this thread still aint fro you.
viruz- i dont really like the seyo perice but the othere 3 pages are tastey
epoc- tjhat other shit i see in penic should be added, tweak the I, and i think it will look pretty good do post when u finish it
Art enables us to find ourselves and luse ourselves at the same time.5IVEONE9INE!
the lil burner i wuz wurkin on
stfuppercut > I cant read the thing above the chick, to blurry better pic maybe?
epoc > good idea of not outlining those extentions yet, dont outline them because they dont look good.
Other wise I like the letters.
cocacola > its clean im just not feelin the letters.
I how you guys skip me...I WANT CRITS MO FOS
Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.
Oh yea i usually only crit the page I post on, to lazy to check the other pages.
Last edited by -Wings-; 10-12-2009 at 09:55 PM.
seyor- dam holmes the S an the R in that bottom piece are real real nice. def keep goin wit that style i could see that turnin into somethin real fresh. thats def the best shit i seen from u by a mile