seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...62#post1207762)
coco - wat hoer said.
tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.