alts... thats dope.. lol
alts... thats dope.. lol
Any crits? I had to use my webcam for this I only got a camera few days ago.
Last edited by TrandomnesstwO; 07-31-2010 at 02:10 AM.
.BOMBING SUBUR...ah fuck it.
Alts is it OTR markers?
And one more.Ohh, I want those OTR's or someth.
Last edited by No_TomorroW; 07-31-2010 at 09:04 AM.
my most recent shitt only thing i did that i think i can put in this thread bc everyone was flippin bout the last thing i painted
TrandomnesstwO > Sorry man but this isnt your place yet, id sugjest working on your letters for a nice bit untill your good enough to come back here.
Suak > Your painting is clean, but your letters need to be put together more well, I see no flow and the widths of the letters go all over the place.
Alts > I love all the pieces except the zealot one, I just dislike the layout of the letters, but the rest is dope, my fave is the ticks closest to the bottom . That fill is just outta hand.
TrandomnesstwO - I think the Toy BB section for now man. I think your just trying a bit to hard. Simplify and get your bars consistent with one another, and try losing some of the extensions, arrows, and add ons for now. Ill keep an eye out for ya.
kew1 - I agree, your painting skills and fill is there, but letter wise it is lacking. The left leg of the S is coming up a bit to high and is starting to cover the middle of the letter, try lowering it just a little. The L is ok, maybe the right extending leg is too high, might be mistaken for a U (like seyo did). The A is far to close to the L and the overlap makes it difficult to make out. And finally the bars in the K are all slightly off and out of proportion.
Sorry if I sound like I'm being harsh, but I think the potential is there just needs more focus.
Sort of an exchange with alts
Duke do you wrinkle your paper before using it because it always seems to have a little wrinkle on it , just asking.
Messing around with some abstract shit for fun.
Okae: I really don't like any of your extensions, they do nothing for your piece, and that E is ugly. The Bode is alright looking and your A is alright.
Goad: I actually dig a lot of that, just I wish you'd keep your bar widths generally pretty standard throughout a single piece. It also looks like your G's are your strongest letters, and you should work on building up others, too. Like your A and especially your D's.
AOk: Toy Bombs and Pieces.
Meroe: Butfuk is a dope name, but I know you can throw out some better handstyles than that. It's dope, but I feel you're capable of more.
Cyto: The only good letter is the first one, if it's a D, but it throws off the flow of the whole piece.
Duke: I don't like how your exchanges never really have any flow, just a lot of standard vertical letters that look close to gothic calligraphy. Cool, but I don't really like that aspect of it.
Alts is a mad man.
honestly i would say that kew1 can stay, his structure has improved a ton, and his painting skills are very good. that fill is bananas. keep it up.
kews structure is still not intermediate... hes just been making the same mistakes for a long time from what ive seen...
i like that brains a lot, im sure its a hate magnet since its abstract and disconnected, but it works and its clean so color that shit and make a piece outta it