^lol leaks
And i completely agree with what cyto said tofe you have been posting that same style for crazy long your almost about to be like REWT. And heres your crit, your letters are all spaced awkward with awkward bends it looks rushed and there is NO flow what so ever.
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TOFE- there's no point in giving you any advice when you dont seem to listen to it
you have not progressed in a loooooooooong time dude, it's the same crap over and over again and no one is fuckin impressed dawg
exchange anyone? im mad bored
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anywho, i would agree that tofe isn't doing the best work right now, i think you should just try to do steezy straighetters. personally, i think it takes more effort to add style and flair into simple block or bubble letters.
i did this the other day, i'm not really happy with it at all. i was really surprised that it came out so close to the sketch, though i never take a sketch to paint. ran out of black, so i couldn't touch things up or fix letter connections.
all in all, i think i can do better, coach.....
tofe the last one isnt bad, but you arent progressing very much
im not tryn to start beef with him, but i havent seen him progress at all
And where good shit
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I doubt it was intentional, but you rocked a browns colorway that was brought home nicely by your "I can do better, coach...." speech.
i did this the other day, i'm not really happy with it at all. i was really surprised that it came out so close to the sketch, though i never take a sketch to paint. ran out of black, so i couldn't touch things up or fix letter connections.
all in all, i think i can do better, coach.....
well played sir. well played indeed.
maybe you should bring a sketch next time or spend more time on working out the sketch on the wall because your sketch has way more flow, the R makes a big difference..looks more like its being pulled backwards by the E instead of pulling forward. oh and id like to see a more flat peak mid of W.
the sketch is real nice though
definately, on the wall the whole thing lost it's entire sense of motion.
youre all idiots.
tofes cool.
and it lost its sense of motion cuz you suck.
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i think tofe just got more comments saying he hasnt progressed than the amount of crits ive got on this site...lulz
well golly
where: i have the same problem when i paint, my paintings turn out alot worse then my sketches, try also stepping away from the wall and looking at the piece every few minutes , this will allow you to see things better bc things look different when you are that close up and painting from when you step back and actually look at it. that looks like a chill spot so just take your time next time, step back, and you should do better.
yo im coming here to get crits not to hear about how i havent progressed,that doesnt help out one bit
that's a funny penguin
crit: make it look even funnier next sketch
paint illegal, straight letters, once youu do that for a couple years. then try an piece.
Tits
You haven't heard, have you? Tofe will NEVER progress.
He'll still do his little wet noodle middle E bars, he'll still draw his wack characters, etc.
*****', crits have been all you've received since you came on here.
TOFE- I like your throws but you need to leave the intermediate thread you really arent close to good enough. go to toy black books and you will probably get more crits. I would love to be able to post flicks in this thread but i dont because im not good enough
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