mone: super dope
just quick exchange with soar crits?
skope nvm those bitchy bitches...only thing you need is a bit more flow and make it less complicated and you will do it good keep postin in here and you get mine crits
mone ur fills are awesome
swae- u tried using an eraser?
God...I really don't understand what's going on in half of this thread.
Buggin out on someone for using a quote?
Kids talking like they fucking king of their city when they're trash?
Boosting kids egos for no reasons?
Mone, that fill is hot, but the letters don't really flow.
Swae, that A is horrrrible. Fix that up, and work on the O and the bottom of the S.
Fuck the Fame, the O is too thin, the Y is awkward, and the U is fatttt. The piece on the page back is bad. It has nooo flow. Idk what the first letter is either...
Skope, do simples. Those are bad. Post in the Toy BB Thread.
Ribcage, shut the fuck up. You don't know what you're talking about. You're in no position to give crits.
Nose, shut the fuck up. It's a god damn quote. People quote shit all the time next to their pieces. Grow the fuck up.
Plankton, lower your ego. You got good can control, but your letters are weakkkk.
Baite, define your letters more. Your pencil is mad light. Can't tell what it's supposed to be.
Homer, the one on the chick in jeans is nice. The one on the chick in the black pants is eh. The O and E are weak. Overall though, good shit.
Ravine, the way you connect the top loop and bottom loop of your B (or top loop and leg on your R) is really weird. You have it where both bars are coming out of the backbone individually, and overlapping a little. They should flow into each other to create a single bar. If you don't get what I mean, I'll make some shit on MS Paint to show you. On the first one, watch your widths, and the bottom of your A is fucked up. Second, again, the bottom right of your A is weird, and the L doesn't really flow. If you're going to have the backbone like that, make the backbone of all the letters like that. The third is kinda bad. It doesn't flow, and feels really...generic. 4th is just...weird.
Phaze, do simples. You got cool fills and all, but your letters are pretty bad.
SicK, not too bad, but not too good either. just work on it.
That's everyone on the last 3 pages critted.
Pen freebie for a battle on AMA. The N is too fat and the extension going into the middle is wack, but I'll fix that when I sketch it out. The bottom of the S is weird, too much dead space, but again, I'll fix it when I sketch it out. Few other small problems I need to fix. I think it has some potential.
That S and P are atrocious.
Heres your exchange MONE ...ohh and good shit mine is kinda sloppy my bad.
havent posted much heres what ive been up to.
yo cats tell me a better server cause this is clearly a dying dinosaur which has been striken by disease called "toys"
no but seriously this has been the only tread wat kept me going here on bs,but now it hurts my eyes to watch this shit wish i would ve joined earlier back in dem glory days,when grass was green and sun was bright.....
n if any of u have beef shit with me come bitches,im in dem mood
bait, its just a website bro, you have a sick style, go out and paint that shit and dont worry about people seeing your sketches when 99% of them will never drive through your city anyway.
mone here's your sketch....turns out bad with an ''e'' so i put r instead
Can that last page be set on fire or something?
Especially Lord Plankton.