The Intermediate Thread

[PETER]

no doubt. I figured if the mods moved it then cool, but I didn't get sponsors playing paintball by playing kids who sucked, or soldier of the year in my unit by haning with the slackers, or a residency at a club by djing top 40 bull shit. I looked forward and pushed myself. The letters are boring, but that was the point. I'm damn near 30 years old and don't give a fuck, all this is for me is a way self medicate with out the medication and hopefully get some pointers and inspiration to keep me going. I'm not out painting walls trying to make a name for myself. It's a felony here and I hold a security clearance and losing that would kill my career not to mention it's all bs anyway. I will never be a meks/augor/insert name here and I'm ok with that, but it's all about having fun etc.

[ribcage]

Its not about having fun... this isnt little league. Doesnt mean you cant have fun doing it...

[seywhat]

sum watnot, ill post my rr piece after the battle goes up.

kasc- toy bb thread yo, keep it simple tho mang
peter- keep doin ya thang man, just work wit ur letters a lil more, u def got the right idea tho
and i thought this thread was for crits, for intermediate nigghas, there def is a step between toy and experienced nah mean. peace

[PETER]

Diggin the hell out of this piece. That A is sharp. I like the tiny y. Only question is is that an R or B, either way it looks damn good. If it's a B I would suggest taking a tiny bit out to make it a little more clear. Cant wait to see it with some color. I just love when people who have little to no letter structure and can't even grasp the basic concept of a single point perspective try to tell people what to do. Thanks man I have a few ideas to work on this weekend when I have some free time. Stay up and stay sharp.

edit. just noticed, I don't know if you can at this point.... but the 3d at the top E next the Y is going off at a crazy angle to the rest, but if you can fix it up and you're on point.

[Strange Journeys]

seyar you should do something about the top of the S

[sema]

so long as everyone is doing it...

Attachment 31163

had to bump this kid too funny
=seyar that sketch is dope bro
-sneaker i dont really care for any of them just my op.

[PETER]

Sneak: work on your handstyle. You certainly have potential and seem to take your time. I like that Megan and it looks like ISC. I would try that ISC again, just make the S have slightly sharper edges like the C. On the ROBA your 3d is all over the place but looks good on the rest. This is very much a personal preferance, but the faces in leters is over done and almost always very badly. I would stear clear of it untill you have something more unique and grimy. They look a little kiddish. The Angel with the horns is cute. I did something similar back in the day.... maybe stick a pitch fork in the background.... or leaning against a letter.... or a tiny little demon sitting on the chunk by the A.

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

[LOPe_GCI]

havent sketched or painted anything in a long time. tryin to shake off the dust

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

tofe, dont crowd your letters so much. keep your bars consistant. for example; if youre gonna have, persay, the bottom of your O thinner than the rest of it then make sure you balance out that bar with the same width for a bar on another letter. [i.e middle bar of E] get what im sayin?

paintface. lose the spinal bar on the E, it constricts flow and makes an otherwise good E look lousy. your letters are a bit crowded [the U n particular] and the individual letters dont have too much flow to em. your working with bars and puttin em together rather than making a letter and putting it with a piece. move on from doing that. i wouldnt suggest doing the flared out bars, you cant really pull em off well. corners can flare out well in my eyes, not the ends of bars. angle the kick of your R to define how its an R so it dosent resemble an A.

[seywhat]

NAWS. RR piece. crit it up. and thanks for the love errbody

lope- good to see sum new stuff man, shits evolving beautifully lol on the real tho
and of course always good to see teze puttin in work. stay up fellas!

[ribcage]

I like the 3d, hers mine

[4menace2society0]

seyar shits dope, what would top it off is if you'd add the shading in the 3d at the beggining of the A and the middle of the A and W going outwards, then lighten up the end of the S a bit and shade the end of that W like under the S and shit going inward, probably wont understand what im sayin im tired as shit and probably not makin any sense

some stupid sketch

[Phillip McDougall]

My thoughts: Go to the Toy thread until you can at least do clean lines.

[vigostar]

Lope- that 2nd one is dope man.... The wheels started to turn instantly while looking at those letters.. and that "E" stellar.

[PETER]

Loving these two. Particularly the Red and Yellow piece.... always been a fan of letters like this. I usually am not a fan of throws, they tend to just look like shit to me but I am diggin' the orange one and the grey and red one. On the green and red one maybe try the tail like bit on the D for the L?

[SECH]

was going to digitlize this ,fix the e up a bit got lazy didn't finish.

[always crushin]

im going to put this color with the second pic.


seyar-Dope shit man you really got that style down.
reach-Best thing so far.
lope- That perts sketch was going straight and lost the arrows it would look sick.
sech-Dope sketch e needs work and lovin the b withe the fire fill.
strangejourney-dont have to do what im sayin but straight out the D bar, lose the extensions on both sides, and lower your t.

[lord_plankton]

i still think that your shit sucks ass sloter...to me its ugly as hell yo

[Saiko]

havent sketched or painted anything in a long time. tryin to shake off the dust

Serious steez on that one in the left corner.