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    do people ever listen, i love how people just dont give kids the time of day because they arent up to par on this thread, he didnt ask if he should be sent to the tot thread, he wants crist, i do agree its a little to complex looking for everything else you have been doing peter, but I like that your asking us for crits, thats how i did it. honestly, start off with the letters you have been doing, then build on those, make them more simple, get the bars and bends going, change up then worry about little extensions here and there, your fills are simple but work, and i kinda like keep at.
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    saying that you're goin to start selling drugs to pay for graffiti supplies on a public forum = A+
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    do you have nudes to back this statement up?

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    This thread is not made for toys to get crits.... just saying
    “Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”

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    no its not, its made for people who are intermediate and have potential to be great and stand in the ranks of the lookie lookie thread, and be given respect by almost all graff head who are on this sight, right now Mogan Peter had more potential then you, not because his letters are better but because hes expanding, and trying, you do the same fuckin letters all the time, never changes the only time they do is when you do a different word, and that word has an E in it, its the same fuckin E from before, you should be in the tot black book thread. so fuck off, learn some new letters.
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    do you have nudes to back this statement up?

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    why dont you go give crits to peter in the tot blackbook thread where he belongs? Just because you post in here doesnt mean your forbidden to post in there

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    yo it's cool you guys shouldn't be bustin on peter so hard. obviously, his shit's considered intermediate, or else mogan would've taken it out of this thread

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    And this is why I have had nothing to say on the matter. The last one is one I did years ago. I haven't been taking my art seriously for years and wanted to get back into and start with simple letters with decent shape and build from there. I've calmed down a lot since I was young and my art reflects that. I live a much more structured and organized life. (Thank you Army) I still don't take it all that serious, I just find that it keeps me from drinking and going crazy (thank you PTSD). If anyone cares to take a look at a small sample of my work from highschool throuh 2009. Some of what I could find anyway.... http://www.flickr.com/photos/antik_1/with/3214510716/

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    Peter I would'nt say your intermediate cuz back in the day when this thread was first started I had more structure going then you and my shit wasnt flying then, so why should it now.
    Just because the rate of decent people on here went down dramatically, doesnt mean the standards should be lowered.
    But Peter I aint hatin' dont get me wrong, you've got structure in there, just VERY simple and boring, but thats just because your finally understanding the concept of structure, to save you alot of time, dont listen to the bullshit kids tell you about bars here, i mean use bars but they dont all have to be the same width and shit, the point of graff is being creative, not being what the next man wants to see, cuz not everyone will like your style.

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    no doubt. I figured if the mods moved it then cool, but I didn't get sponsors playing paintball by playing kids who sucked, or soldier of the year in my unit by haning with the slackers, or a residency at a club by djing top 40 bull shit. I looked forward and pushed myself. The letters are boring, but that was the point. I'm damn near 30 years old and don't give a fuck, all this is for me is a way self medicate with out the medication and hopefully get some pointers and inspiration to keep me going. I'm not out painting walls trying to make a name for myself. It's a felony here and I hold a security clearance and losing that would kill my career not to mention it's all bs anyway. I will never be a meks/augor/insert name here and I'm ok with that, but it's all about having fun etc.

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    Its not about having fun... this isnt little league. Doesnt mean you cant have fun doing it...

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    sum watnot, ill post my rr piece after the battle goes up.

    kasc- toy bb thread yo, keep it simple tho mang
    peter- keep doin ya thang man, just work wit ur letters a lil more, u def got the right idea tho
    and i thought this thread was for crits, for intermediate nigghas, there def is a step between toy and experienced nah mean. peace

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    Diggin the hell out of this piece. That A is sharp. I like the tiny y. Only question is is that an R or B, either way it looks damn good. If it's a B I would suggest taking a tiny bit out to make it a little more clear. Cant wait to see it with some color. I just love when people who have little to no letter structure and can't even grasp the basic concept of a single point perspective try to tell people what to do. Thanks man I have a few ideas to work on this weekend when I have some free time. Stay up and stay sharp.

    edit. just noticed, I don't know if you can at this point.... but the 3d at the top E next the Y is going off at a crazy angle to the rest, but if you can fix it up and you're on point.
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    seyar you should do something about the top of the S

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    so long as everyone is doing it...

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    had to bump this kid too funny
    =seyar that sketch is dope bro
    -sneaker i dont really care for any of them just my op.

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    Sneak: work on your handstyle. You certainly have potential and seem to take your time. I like that Megan and it looks like ISC. I would try that ISC again, just make the S have slightly sharper edges like the C. On the ROBA your 3d is all over the place but looks good on the rest. This is very much a personal preferance, but the faces in leters is over done and almost always very badly. I would stear clear of it untill you have something more unique and grimy. They look a little kiddish. The Angel with the horns is cute. I did something similar back in the day.... maybe stick a pitch fork in the background.... or leaning against a letter.... or a tiny little demon sitting on the chunk by the A.

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    havent sketched or painted anything in a long time. tryin to shake off the dust
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    tofe, dont crowd your letters so much. keep your bars consistant. for example; if youre gonna have, persay, the bottom of your O thinner than the rest of it then make sure you balance out that bar with the same width for a bar on another letter. [i.e middle bar of E] get what im sayin?

    paintface. lose the spinal bar on the E, it constricts flow and makes an otherwise good E look lousy. your letters are a bit crowded [the U n particular] and the individual letters dont have too much flow to em. your working with bars and puttin em together rather than making a letter and putting it with a piece. move on from doing that. i wouldnt suggest doing the flared out bars, you cant really pull em off well. corners can flare out well in my eyes, not the ends of bars. angle the kick of your R to define how its an R so it dosent resemble an A.
    Tits

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    NAWS. RR piece. crit it up. and thanks for the love errbody

    lope- good to see sum new stuff man, shits evolving beautifully lol on the real tho
    and of course always good to see teze puttin in work. stay up fellas!

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    I like the 3d, hers mine


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    seyar shits dope, what would top it off is if you'd add the shading in the 3d at the beggining of the A and the middle of the A and W going outwards, then lighten up the end of the S a bit and shade the end of that W like under the S and shit going inward, probably wont understand what im sayin im tired as shit and probably not makin any sense

    some stupid sketch


 

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