My thoughts: Go to the Toy thread until you can at least do clean lines.
Lope- that 2nd one is dope man.... The wheels started to turn instantly while looking at those letters.. and that "E" stellar.
Last edited by PETER; 09-02-2011 at 02:36 PM.
was going to digitlize this ,fix the e up a bit got lazy didn't finish.
im going to put this color with the second pic.
seyar-Dope shit man you really got that style down.
reach-Best thing so far.
lope- That perts sketch was going straight and lost the arrows it would look sick.
sech-Dope sketch e needs work and lovin the b withe the fire fill.
strangejourney-dont have to do what im sayin but straight out the D bar, lose the extensions on both sides, and lower your t.
looks like alotta ppl been gettin better, styles have improved alot or either keep gettin better, talkin bout the ppl on the last page. some shit for talkin.
Last edited by AZTEKA; 09-04-2011 at 12:35 AM. Reason: because i wanted too.
thanks for the crit slotr, that pen sketch is hella dope
hypor the last one is the best , my personal opinion is sharp letters are played.
nice tezr... although that Z game up there makes it look like it's an A
2nd one is tight, both clean as always
good bold letters reach, reminds me of letters i started with. keep it up. thin em out over time an add more flow to em.
tezr, sick characters man, it was said how your Z to R looks like an A. still ill
good piece sear. try having the bar off the S to the middle of your E start out under the E and come through ontop, rather than the other way around that you have. it dosent look fly with it sitting ontop of the S to ontop of the E in my eyes. raise the section of the A were the bars meet a bit higher, its got a midget swag goin to it and the deadspace on the A dosent suit up with the middle of the R or S. maybe try a bar coming on a 45 degree angle downwards off the kick of your K to make it pop out more and empasize the ending of your piece. itd balance it out more with the extension on the bottom left of your S as well plus give it style points. darker forcefield.
solid lettering hypor, nothing to say really
Shit man I really aint feeling either of em to be honest, but ya i got you, Im gunna go catch another tomorrow, try and see what if I can come up with something decent, and also your exchange is in the making, just aint rushing it.
oh word, i completely forgot about yours. sorry G. ill have it in your inbox tomorrow and you must have edited the first piece in afterwards. or i missed it, all my crits are directed towards the second piece. i like it, its dope. your best in recent memory.
not much positive to say about the first though, keep at it!