The Intermediate Thread

**garbage down tha way** · 10-12-2009 09:39 PM

Originally Posted by ChadWarden

nah, the fill is sick in my opinion. only thing is you have waaay too many arrows. to the point were it looks retarded.

but different people have different tastes, so do what you're feeling.

Yo son you aint hurd? aint a burner unless that biatch do be havin over like 10 arrowz ! ! real talk.

SIZE keep doing exactly what youre doing that thangs nice.

SATRA? - as a whole its alright but the letters need to be tweaked.

**-Wings-** · 10-12-2009 09:39 PM

stfuppercut > I cant read the thing above the chick, to blurry better pic maybe?
epoc > good idea of not outlining those extentions yet, dont outline them because they dont look good.
Other wise I like the letters.
cocacola > its clean im just not feelin the letters.

**(SoS)Viruz** · 10-12-2009 09:49 PM

I how you guys skip me...I WANT CRITS MO FOS

**-Wings-** · 10-12-2009 09:51 PM

Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.
Oh yea i usually only crit the page I post on, to lazy to check the other pages.

**(SoS)Viruz** · 10-12-2009 09:54 PM

Originally Posted by -Wings-

Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.

I confuse myself sometimes

lol I didnt know what to do for a O and its like my 1st time back to the paper in a while lol Ill work on it

**garbage down tha way** · 10-12-2009 10:18 PM

oh ya SOS im liking the letters, they look kinda like my dude GENRE.

**LOPe_GCI** · 10-12-2009 10:28 PM

seyor- dam holmes the S an the R in that bottom piece are real real nice. def keep goin wit that style i could see that turnin into somethin real fresh. thats def the best shit i seen from u by a mile

**Epoc** · 10-12-2009 10:29 PM

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...62#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

**Queezy** · 10-12-2009 11:20 PM

Hand exchange anyone?

**STFUPPERCUT** · 10-13-2009 01:20 AM

m+s- lay off the amphetamines ;]

**SONE.** · 10-13-2009 03:21 AM

**eng** · 10-13-2009 04:03 AM

Originally Posted by Epoc

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...62#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

i think your shit would look 10x better if you used a thinner outlining pen

**.od.** · 10-13-2009 11:44 AM

exchange with scream out

**smooth_nuts** · 10-13-2009 12:43 PM

od-simples.now.
seyor-looking proper.
sone-throwups are looking proper.

KRE1 · 10-13-2009 12:56 PM

smooth i love ur steez keep it comin. im diggin the simp handy

**.nolove.** · 10-13-2009 12:59 PM

Originally Posted by Epoc

seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...62#post1207762)

coco - wat hoer said.

tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

looks much better.

**smooth_nuts** · 10-13-2009 01:03 PM

Originally Posted by smooth_nuts

od-simples.now.
seyor-looking proper.
sone-throwups are looking proper.

hefty kings!

bump for the new page.
i honestly dont do stickers any more m+s,plus i alreayd owe like 78327647682347862423 packs from like a year ago lol :/
and i shouted it out cause i have a mad cid head friend who always does and thats in his book so....