The Intermediate Thread

[b SQUARED 08]

Yeah, that looks nothing like Alts style to me whatsoever. Looks more like milfhunter's style if I were to compare, but nice work nonetheless.

[Zookyook]

if bets can post here so can i.... yo bets, send ur pic to vagrant so he can set up a battle thread.... i sent mine to him already

[RedEyes]

zoo you nor i can post here, were not ready yet. if you look back at the beginning pages of the Toy BB its got alot of decent stuff. Ill make sure to give some good crits but for now we belong in the toy forum.

[Zookyook]

yea but thats the thing... this IS the goddamn toy forum... the people saying we cant post here dont make the rules so fuck em, im gonna look in this thread and if i have something to say im saying it... graffiti in itself didnt come about by doing what ur told

[Bets369R]

if bets can post here so can i.... yo bets, send ur pic to vagrant so he can set up a battle thread.... i sent mine to him already

i sent it to him. now just gotta wait for him to post the thread. i wont be home till 9pst. fuck working at walmart.

[Zookyook]

its all good... thanks for poppin my battle cherry hahaha... no hard feelings

[LeaksOne]

damn you *****s are really trippin over this thread haha

[caesar1]

any crits or tips

[Queezy]

yea but thats the thing... this IS the goddamn toy forum... the people saying we cant post here dont make the rules so fuck em, im gonna look in this thread and if i have something to say im saying it... graffiti in itself didnt come about by doing what ur told

It's a branch off of the toy forum hence the name "Intermediate". It's a very small step above "toy" but it's still a step and you aren't ready yet. And graffiti might not have been bred from doing what your told, but you also don't go into a yard where there are much better writers and do some horrible bombs over really good pieces. My main point being, toy blackbook....

[408Bomber]

any crits or tips

Crit/Tip: Stay in the toy forum a lil longer unless you wanna get slayed.

Try making it flow in all 1 style, it looks like you put cope's style plus you'r own, you needa clean it up.

[<J-one>]

i guess i can see how the Kid Wicked could look like milf hunters stuff with the sludgey lookin D and such...
but its definetly all my shit

thank for the props to those who gave them

rank - that stuff looks pretty cool, tidy your lines up a bit though for the freshness
ceasar - head back to the "toy thread" and work on some proportions and alignment of your letters a bit, and the S is kinda silly.if your just startin out hit the cliche'd simples and straights. i dont see the cope
scream out- props on pickin a word with double the double letters, that highlighter is actually pretty cool, not a fan of the one liner though, it gets real busy after the O
cocacola- i like the colours in the fill, your 3d on the C is a bit off and maybe tidy your outline up a bit

i'll post more soon

anyone wanna battle im bored as shit

[-Wings-]

J-one looked through some of your stuff one flickr. Mad dope man, cant wait to see more.
Anyways not much sketching lately, not really been in the mood. :/

The bars are to thin.. (still have to color the 3d in black, but no black marker atm)

Oh yea this thread has gone to shits, so much bullshit. Zoners been destroying shit lately though!

[CrustOner]

Webcam doesn't do it justice. Not too great, but I'm pretty proud of it.
I don't like the R too much, and I don't like the things on the bottom.

Crits:
Seyo: I think the Y is too far from the E, and I don't like the loop on the leftmost part of the S. That shit is solid though.
Caesar: Toy thread, but it seems my throws are pretty lame, so I probably shouldn't give you advice. That handstyle is fucking ugly as shit though. Probably because it's so crammed.
Aever: that first highlighter piece is sick, I don't like mini letters though.. and the throw is cool, just not my thing. That Aever handstyle is dope too.
Crus: To be honest, I really don't like it. I think the face could, and should be worked on, too.
Bets: That would have looked better without the cuts.
Rank: Your shit is sick. it's got a really cool, old western feel to it, with graffiti roots, but a hint of tattoo culture. Keep it up, I want to see more.

[LeaksOne]

It's a branch off of the toy forum hence the name "Intermediate". It's a very small step above "toy" but it's still a step and you aren't ready yet. And graffiti might not have been bred from doing what your told, but you also don't go into a yard where there are much better writers and do some horrible bombs over really good pieces. My main point being, toy blackbook....

ok so since this statement seems to be the main mind set of this thread. why make a new thread to make yourselves big headed? i agree 100% with baze and the new thread name. but seriously why make an entire new thread cuz your better then the toy threads? i mean wouldnt you want to stay in the toy bb to post inspiration and help others elevate to your level? i dont understand why this is being treated like the big boy threads.

[CrustOner]

What does the big boy thread serve as? Inspiration to us. Do we post in it? No. There are three levels. Toy, Intermediate, then Advanced. It's a way of separating the "I JUST STARTD HEERS SUM PIX HIT ME BAK WIT UR THOTS" from the people who have been working towards the Advanced thread and are making progress, but can't get decent criticism from others of their level because they are being drowned in the bullshit being thrown out.

[Atomik]

wings-nice..
crust- nice R feeling the piece as well man quicky for talking

[-Wings-]

You guys all bitch about this intermeidate, toy and experienced crap way to much :/.
If you post in here you get trashed, your a toy. Simple as that, majority rules. If you post in the experienced thread and they delete your stuff or trash you, that means your either a very stupid toy or intermeidate :/... Is this really that hard to understand? I dont see why everyone wants to be good right away, as long as your getting up and you dont totally suck your still getting your name up. And your eventually gonna get good if you keep at it anyways

srime > I love black fills with red outlines! Also same structure agian, looks a bit different with a random arrow here and there but I still think you could pull off a dope different looking m and r. S and E are fine (but you should change that up every now and then to).

[LeaksOne]

you guys take this shit way to serious haha

[BlacktodaFuture]

there have never been problems with this shit before, if you dont fit in here, we tell you to get out so do it until you deserve to be in here. nuff said.

respect your elders.

[OOPS!]

The word toy is thrown around way too much. Egotistical dumbasses..