The Intermediate Thread

**graff4ever** · 02-11-2010 11:32 PM

Originally Posted by funhouseXcast

mers exchange. i'll repost tomorrow unless i hear from ya. take your time, just acknowledge wether or not you see it atesk.

nice

good 2 be back on after while

**seywhat** · 02-11-2010 11:41 PM

Originally Posted by seywhat

bump, i need some crits yo

funhouse- im just not diggin the inconsistencies in the bars, letters aint bad though
seek- dont worry bout extensions, work on your structure first of all. ur colorin skills are nice

**B.S. P0LICE** · 02-12-2010 12:20 AM

nice flow on the first seyar

**B.S. P0LICE** · 02-12-2010 12:21 AM

almost forgot

**CrustOner** · 02-12-2010 12:45 AM

Oh how I missed your coloring skills.

**Rank-oner!** · 02-12-2010 03:40 AM

Seyar, that first one is dope. you should cut the 3d off sooner though and not have it going all the way to the vanishing point. also that one s is dope as well. Personally on the first one im not digging the kind of extension bar on the R leg.

B.s. Thats ill as well. def have mad coloring skills.

Some bullshit simples i decided to color in quickly
White paint pen was drying out on me on the end

**SofatOner101** · 02-12-2010 04:58 AM

B.S - That is sweet mate, but damn I wish you had a 3D on those letters. They just look a little flat rather than popping outta the hole in the wall. But totally dope otherwise.
Rank - Love it ay. Would make a nice panel

**Boris The Blade** · 02-12-2010 05:35 AM

seyar- not diggin the extension on freestyle's y, but otherwise shit looks ace. 3rd one has most potential, imo, if you can get all the other letters to fit that style.

BS- it's not my personal favourite style; normally i like negative space, but it just isn't working on that one, imo. the fill is nice, as is the background, just not my taste. I think it's the lack of 3-d on the letters, but the background is caving in. it looks a smidgen flat. But, if it works for you, it works.

Rank- Nice, simple, love the fill. would be a clean panel. reminds me of the cat PAST up here in germany. Good stuff.

crits, please?

**BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK** · 02-12-2010 06:06 AM

Originally Posted by BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

FOR THIS N*GGA SLOTR
MAYBE ILL FIX THE FILL ON THE T AND R ONE DAY BUT NOT TODAY

I WANT MY GOD DAMN E-FAME!

**Alts13** · 02-12-2010 07:38 AM

coloured this, really not sure about it, it is different so a break from the norm. Will work on the other note sketch later

**SEEK NRA** · 02-12-2010 08:09 AM

thanks sayer.
BS-thats some pret fresh coloring.
wat up alts! like the letters as always, the coloring different. dont know how i feel about it yet.
did you checkout the coloring on the peice i did like 3pgs back?? crits.

**Alts13** · 02-12-2010 08:41 AM

Originally Posted by B.S. P0LICE

mind linking me to those battles man?

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/sho...81991&page=889

there you go man

**Alts13** · 02-12-2010 08:44 AM

Originally Posted by SEEK NRA

trying new things, fills-colors-background

crits..

I would say that the colours are a little too much, I'm not sure how the 3D colour and the fill colour work, I would personally have gone for a grey tone 3D with such vibrant fill colours. But keep working at it, you don't learn unless you try! But focus more on your letters, don't worry about extensions yet, maybe cut the 3D back don't have it going all the way back to the vanishing point because those letters are pretty skinny. But work on the letters, I'm not actually sure what it says.

**Rank-oner!** · 02-12-2010 12:29 PM

Alts that shit is dope. I like the colors. I think that would look fresh on a wall for sure.
You wouldn't want to exchange would you?

any way painted this sketch. Used only rusto and valspar. Oh and the 3d color is old krylon khaki.

**Alts13** · 02-12-2010 12:45 PM

that painting is clean as fuck Rank - props, only thing is the 3D is a bit fucked up on the bottom of the K but fuck it overall it is dope

yea man I will be down for an exchange, gimme a few days and I should get one completed for you.

**Rank-oner!** · 02-12-2010 12:54 PM

the vanishing point is under the left bottom side of the A and that bar bends so i thought it would disappear like that. Is that not right?

**Alts13** · 02-12-2010 01:09 PM

excuse my shitty mouse control in MS paint but if the vanishing point is below the A I would have said the 3D should have gone more like this

maybe not exactly like that but I think there should be more 3D showing under the K

**AteskOne** · 02-12-2010 01:13 PM

if the vanishing point was higher up that would be correct. the way alts showed is pretty much how it should look.

pen freestyle for myns i did in class this morning. will have a more proper version probably later tonight.

fucked up the top of the S a little. will be fixed on my final version.