The Intermediate Thread

[weakfingers]

From the grave - Looking consistent, no real crits i can think of atm.
Sin - I dont liek the letters that much, its just clean and colourfull
SixSixThree- I'm guessing you used to write zoner?
Alts- your on that next level.
Duke- The top of the S needs abit more definition but the drawing is amazing,


Still trying to break away from my previous style and start with something new, any crit would be greatly appreceated

[Sesh-it-up]

this page is hot, that battle looks like zoner on crack lol not callin a bite just sayin

Edit: shoulda said it reminds me of zoner.. a bit

[STUTERS-DAILY]

weakfingersim begining to like your style more and more.. its gettin edgy
altsalways looking fresh, i gotta say i like the colors
sixsixthreesecond one looks awesome.. sick fill regardless of whether or not is a bite

edit:messed up with the link on this one.. tried fixing it didnt work out
not so happy with this one.. dunno if ill add anything more

extra simple

goofin around with "she got a donk".. and tried something new on the bottom, pretty happy with it

[Sesh-it-up]

u dont belong hurrrr....^
but thats just me, talk to the big boys befor you bounce.

Edit, you should 3d the bomb in donk, thatd be pimpin

[CrustOner]

I say Toy thread.

[garbage down tha way]

BATTLE-nice shit!

stuttersdaily-dont do thin shit like that fatten that sucka up take them letters to dinner son supersize that mofucka.

[viseversa101]

ive seen alot of hoer sumwhere b4 cant remember...im from toledo tho so maybe a train or columbus

[SIXSIXTHREE]

[B]
SixSixThree- I'm guessing you used to write zoner?

nope, been writing Batler since i started.

sixsixthreesecond one looks awesome.. sick fill regardless of whether or not is a bite

Definitely not a bite.

[ravine]

hoer the fuckin man

[CrustOner]

Good shit, Batler and Hoers.

[MyManRoyGBiv!]

From the grave - Looking consistent, no real crits i can think of atm.
Sin - I dont liek the letters that much, its just clean and colourfull
SixSixThree- I'm guessing you used to write zoner?
Alts- your on that next level.
Duke- The top of the S needs abit more definition but the drawing is amazing,


Still trying to break away from my previous style and start with something new, any crit would be greatly appreceated

Dont hide your K like that mang, the little bend in the U isnt a very good idea imo as well, if your looking for inspiration start immersing yourself in different forms of art, if you havent done so already, I find things like cubism really get the pencil moving, give it a shot.

[Alts13]

couple of freestyles in work (gonna finish the piece in full biro I think)

simples (I know I posted the Blue one before but to get a pic of the brown one I had to include it)

[SIXSIXTHREE]

i dig your style alts. do you paint?

[Alts13]

Not so much recently I have fulltime job a wife and child so don't really have the time and weather has been so shit, hopefully gonna be out a lot this summer get back into it

[viseversa101]

i always dig alts style....gg my man, glad to see batler makin a home here too

[SIXSIXTHREE]

yeah alts i know how that goes with the priorities

vise thanks for the warm welcome

[Sesh-it-up]

Hoer!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bilnek]

batle thats sick but work on sumtin more complicated.....its only simps on here
alts there is no need to crit you...ur style rocks, but man how old are you?? u say u got a wife and a kid....that sounds ooold =P

[408Bomber]

here's some an old stlye i was playing with..but i dropped it...like msot styles i start >.>
its supposed to say fresh but the h got cut off n i lost the paper.


here's my new style im working on...
before

after



some ewok stuff from my boy's blackbo0k






crits on my work?

[LeaksOne]

bilnek you may want to revise those E's. they look alot like M's.