The Intermediate Thread

[idk401]

can i get some feed back>??

[AteskOne]

change that little bump hanging off the front of the S. the K could use a little work too but it looks nice.

[idk401]

thanks bro.

[m+s]

all asian people dig my shit, its crazy. yo atesk, can you crit me on that lest joint i did on the last page.

[I GOT CLOUT]

clout! whatup dude! next time im in town we'll smoke a blunt for sure.


oh and btw nice simples on top and that hand is dopee

Haha what up with it son? I told you I knew your name looked familiar. And im definately always down to smoke a blunt. So ill get at you when im away from the family sometime this weekend.

And I appreciate all the feedback from everyone.
m+s, I agree with what nouveau said. Sorry to say, but man, your structure needs work.
Skey, I also agree with what atsek said. The spacing between the s and k needs adjustment. Maybe the S itself can be changed to create better overall flow to it.

[HëRbN]

ill throw in on that bleezy. pics on there way.

[m+s]

Sorry to say, but man, your structure needs work.

dont be sorry, i know its hurting. any specifics?

[AteskOne]

all asian people dig my shit, its crazy. yo atesk, can you crit me on that lest joint i did on the last page.

yeah i agree the structure does need some work but i think that could be developed into a sick style. what i would try doin is dumbing it down a little. not completely to block letters keep trying different ways to bend the letters and shit but definitely enough that you can build up a good structure. you get what i'm sayin?

[seywhat]

i think kind of build your style around that s, it looks the strongest. your style is coming along though, keep developing it man

[weakfingers]

Im really Diggin those Easer Sketches last page.

Havent been sketching in a quick minute but Im getting kinda frustrated with drawing lately. I have an idea of how I want things to look but its just not coming out on paper or paint...

[unsuccsessfull]

jst keep workin on it mengu goten alot beter

[I GOT CLOUT]

sqwint on the sketch the dead space with the w needs to be eradicated. It kills all flow of the sketch. paint doesnt look bad.

And zoner..dope. Your r's especially are usually fire.

[m+s]

thanks for the feedback seyar

[W_G_O_N_E]

[I GOT CLOUT]

Thats pretty dope son. Not lovin the background so much, but the letters and color scheme are on point.

[AteskOne]

only letter i'm not feeling is the D. i would have made it look more rounded like the O.

[MoganOne]

jst keep workin on it mengu goten alot beter

This looks so raw man... Keep it up

[MoganOne]

Solrac
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PRS
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Attempting to make the letters look lifely lol

[Bilnek]

sum jibba jabba wit pens

mogan-1st one is nuce...loose the eyes on the 2nd one
weaks-make the ''s'' a little bit cleaner....and work on your structure
zoner and wgone props


crit meh nao

[I GOT CLOUT]

could use some more arrows.
Mogan that solrac is nice.