The Intermediate Thread

[MoganOne]

sum jibba jabba wit pens

mogan-1st one is nuce...loose the eyes on the 2nd one
weaks-make the ''s'' a little bit cleaner....and work on your structure
zoner and wgone props


crit meh nao

Thanks bro but the Eyes where the whole point in me doing that piece lol... The letterstructures suck I just wanted to see if I was capable of working the eyes into it.... Nice piece btw

[I GOT CLOUT]

Bilnek. The letters need the most work. Which until you have those down you shouldnt be doing any extensions. The background doesnt look horrible, but like I said, until you have the letters down pact everything else is pointless.

[idk401]

[massacreman]

skey, good job, you actually listened to your crits, not alot people do that on this forum.
really good job,keep it up
if i were you id fix the cut in the upper bars of the Y and make the Y flow more with the other letters, they are bending like this (((| get it?

[pleasedontstayr]

also Skey, i would move the E a bit more out to the right, it almost looks like an F.

[Epoc]

slowly moving.

[Stuck]

no

[408Bomber]

slowly moving.

toy bb

[Epoc]

^^^ lol

alrighty thats a clear negator one the trial of extensions.

next one will be no bullshit added.

[408Bomber]

do simples...nothing else.

[AteskOne]

no. as you can see from what he just posted he can do simples. simples are just to learn structure. if you do nothing but simples your never gunna progress. keep working at that style you were working with. the only way to develope a style is trial and error. some things work somethings dont. you wont figure out what works if you just stick to simples.

[408Bomber]

no. as you can see from what he just posted he can do simples. simples are just to learn structure. if you do nothing but simples your never gunna progress. keep working at that style you were working with. the only way to develope a style is trial and error. some things work somethings dont. you wont figure out what works if you just stick to simples.

well from what people told me a few pages back. simples are what u should do to make ur structure better.

[Epoc]

*highfive*

i dont really bother posting reality/counter argument like that anymore since it never leads anywhere buts its nice when people like atesk say watsup.

[BlacktodaFuture]

yeah but once you learn it, start doing things alittle more complex, and a little more and a little more till you get to the top.

[408Bomber]

fa sho....what happend black? I was waiting in the mw2 lobby for like 20 mintues

[Epoc]

yeah but once you learn it, start doing things alittle more complex, and a little more and a little more till you get to the top.

ahmen. people are quick to either shoot you down or prop you up.

i post here cause i know the basics and a bit (believe it or not) and its a good place to get a wide response.

enough bs though. ill make something new tomorrow. and we can all have a little discussion again.

[AteskOne]

well from what people told me a few pages back. simples are what u should do to make ur structure better.

this is true. but simples dont have to be just plain block letters. that style that epoc's trying to devolpe is relatively simple. he's just bending the bars of the letters. that's what you wanna do after you get a good feeling for simples is start experimenting with bending the letters and changing widths and shit. that's how you begin to develope a style.

[idk401]

good lookz massacreman and plsdntstayr

[408Bomber]

this is true. but simples dont have to be just plain block letters. that style that epoc's trying to devolpe is relatively simple. he's just bending the bars of the letters. that's what you wanna do after you get a good feeling for simples is start experimenting with bending the letters and changing widths and shit. that's how you begin to develope a style.

i think i see whatchu mean, I was playing around and made this a while ago.

i know it aint much but is that whatchu mean

[BlacktodaFuture]

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