The Intermediate Thread

[SicK-]

^lol leaks
And i completely agree with what cyto said tofe you have been posting that same style for crazy long your almost about to be like REWT. And heres your crit, your letters are all spaced awkward with awkward bends it looks rushed and there is NO flow what so ever.

Bump for tofe so he can get his crits

[weakfingers]

yo im coming here to get crits not to hear about how i havent progressed,that doesnt help out one bit

Make every single bar the same width, The E is to wide the the O is to small. Ditch coloring for now now and stop doing characters focus on letters only.
Make sure the letters are spaced evenly apart. After you can do that successfully then tilt all the letters to the left then to the right then go crazy with learning little effects like shine, three-D Shadow going in all direction that will make you progress, then after that the whole graffiti thing is up to you.

[lord_plankton]

and before and meanwhile "that" , the whole graffiti thing is up to whom?? stupid.

[weakfingers]

Whats with all the hot heads on here? It seems now days the majority of Children just cause shit rather then give people actual constructive help.
To clarify what you dident understand about my last statement is this.
Graffiti in the uber toy phase is all about learning the bare minimums of bars and style, after you learn bars the rest of your life in the graffiti world cannot be taught over the internet, It all depends on your own personal drive and practice.

[SECH]

bumb for crits (i know i've been told am not good enough to post here but here it goes anyway)

[Kaiser71]

Sech: lose the way that little parts of the letters like fold out of the outline like random extra pieces

Cant see anyone else on this page except Tofe, and hes gotten plenty of feedback

Felt like coloring in my boys book....crits?

[ravine]

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaamn^^^

[H1P30N3R]

I don't know much about letter structure but the color combos and style are on point props kaiser

[SicK-]

Kaiser that shit is on FIRE! but the background KILLS it for me

[Phillip McDougall]

E reminds me of

R is kind of front-heavy, work on that, D is solid, S is kind of awkward, and looks a little like an ugly Z. Excellent coloring skills, especially on the R and the diamond.

[luvsac]

meannnn ass coloring skillzz red

[Kaiser71]

Thanks for the crits....and the "s that looks like a z" is actually supposed to be a Z ha.

And for the record to the comment about the background, It's actually a white page in a blackbook that I colored to look like 3 hole punched yellow lined paper gettin burned through. The burn/fade looks better before being scanned.

[Phillip McDougall]

Wow. You did a lot of work on that piece.

[SicK-]

^i can see it now

[BlacktodaFuture]

reds: best thing in my blackbook right now, thanks man. i will put as much work into your book, once we find where we put it...

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

paint graffiti, dont sketch it.

[Kaiser71]

Or ideally do both, and only post the latter on the public internet if you aren't from a city of a couple hundred thousand or larger

[Phillip McDougall]

Toy thread..

[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

get off the internet and do graffiti. then you will become what you daydream of being. skill is nothing if you have no ambition or drive.

the people who actually start off on this site and progress to something actually get out and do it. this is why i have some respect for rewt. cuz he actually paints. as big of a douchebag as he is. he still paints.

learn from that an go paint.

but dont be a douchebag.

boring straight letters may be boring and yall think its toyish. but go out an paint these boring straight letters on the streets an youll get a new perspective for them.

[BlacktodaFuture]

as much as i agree w. guy, you don't have to post EVERYTHING you do. they are straight. rewt and i have prob done the same amount but you dont have to know about all the ones i do. but agreed, less jibba jabba, more painting.