my Nerdz sketch battle entry that didn't make it to final best 10 poll it took some effort
crits are greatly apreciated
Way to much space between each letters phat... and you have too much going on in it... I like how your Z came out looking... I do not like any of your extensions
Last edited by MoganOne; 04-16-2011 at 05:56 PM.
Y Nerdz piece for talk
photoshop cs5 to be exact, on his windows machine
phat- the r to z connection is spot on
For Wilbur Exchange..Any Crits?
EDIT: im tellin you guys...lady gaga is da shiznit!
jabka-your style is pure tits dude im loving it.Trying to get down with an exchange??
wilbur-your going in the right direction with your structure,keep at the simples.
for a battle that never got posted.
trying to get my letters back,first try at anything in along time,idk.
retard fill lol.
I like that top piece you did Douchbag... That skull is wack...
...idk,i always liked cartoony charac bombs,it's just a reworked old idea
this is the orginal
a Possible logo for a Thai cuisine Restaurant T-shirts...
^The I isnt all the recognizable
I like the cartoony skull, Okaer. I see it done HUGE in paint on a lot of walls. handle that shit. and Mone, that I is way too hidden. Get rid of the curls, they fuck up your flow, but in the sense that they create false flow and take up negative space that should be filled with letter structure. the MY is too crowded compared to the THA, and the T's point at the bottom looks strange compared to the rest of the piece.
sanc- so sick man.
mone- as everyone else said the i is to hidden.
okaer- on the last piece id get rid of those bar things on the o and a.
chonic- id make your w bigger and lose the top extensions of it add more drips to the bottom but as you said its just an exchange.
tasty- the top sketch has potential the s is dope maybe try to shrink your letters down instead of making em so tall and then give them some thickening up.
i fixed the t so it doesnt look like an e as well and i think my r should be fixed but yee crit if ya want.
gunna color as well
Last edited by 1ok; 04-18-2011 at 03:00 AM.