Untitled by senseless slaps(cosmo), on Flickr
Didn't have much time
Untitled by senseless slaps(cosmo), on Flickr
Didn't have much time
Perfect the craftfar from intermediate. This does not belong hereOriginally Posted by ven0m
did this with my homeboy... he did the characters and I did the letters
Last edited by Mori; 06-19-2012 at 04:10 PM.
Apes is dope, try to make all your letters lean with the A and P.. Juss sayin.
What makes you a real writer?
Never doin' the same style twice.
thanks stuck
That's toooo dope man! Good shit Kwu!
What makes you a real writer?
Never doin' the same style twice.
KWU your shit is looking legit props!
A piece I am working on
Last edited by MoganOne; 06-19-2012 at 08:58 PM.
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
good shit mone, i like the cheetah print haha.
stay or go?
not completely done yet, still gotta get the background.
not ready yet ni99a, your on the right track though keep fuckin with it
mone that page is tight! but you really got stop using that E just cause Pike's has the same kick back, i know you can create something more original homie
one to bless yall
diggin that sear, fix the bottom right of the R then go paint it bruh.
and big faggot, like sear said, keep working on it you're definitely on the right track.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Fucked up on the E hard but i like the idea of hybrid letters kinda like revok/augorish mixed with a more straight letter stee. May give it another go
"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
mone, nice shit. the cheetah print is deadly.
Lol its tiger stripes thanks yo! @sear that lower case style E is used by many but i do see what u mean by the same kickback
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
dam mone that look raw
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
I was going to freak out. Mone it looks dope.
Stuck: I'm diggin' it. I'd like to see what you do with it with some more work.
Quick 10 minute freestyle on a napkin at work
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
simply added a background to this sketch, but i would still appreciate more criticism on it
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
mori, you a hater... but your opinion will be taken into consideration.
yo intermediate thread regulars, I need a jury on my piece (the one mori quoted up there) and tasty's flick right above me here while you're at it
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
both not intermediate. yours is a lot closer though. It appears you have decent can control even though this one aint up to par when it comes to you, and if you would have just done those letters with no extensions and add ons and what not, and just kept the base of the letters simple, then it would have looked much better. Definetly would have to cut your boy's character out that bitch too.
tasty no matter how many times u post that sketch it aint gonna cut it. your piece is like when simple goes overboard. Your forcing extensions and bar bends in places that shouldnt have bends and extensions. The A has 5 extensions making it totally off balance. The N's middle bar is completely retarded, it starts straight and then half way bends awkwardly into the right bar...what is that? Youd think that extension happyness was cause u wanted to kill negative space, but u left a big gap where the N is. The E has an extension on the bottom that goes to nowhere and the top bar has another one of those strange bends.
Tasty ima start with what u do have down: You have a decent idea of what to do with the 3d shadowing it looks legit. You have clean "Confident" lines to some extent. You filled your piece in nice and simple and quick.
But now my question is do you like how your piece looks?? Do you like that style that you have? When I look at your piece I think that it has potential but looks boring IMO. Here is why I think this. It comes off looking very flat like a CONOCO Gas station logo
Now in the long run u could possibly make this style look dope if you execute it properly but You would have to make it super clean and semetrical, Meaning that all the letters must maneuver properly to help one another create the piece as whole well balanced piece.
But on the other hand like I was saying imo the style is pretty flat and not really what I like to see. I would suggest messing with or adjusting the bar widths of your pieces to kill negative space and to also help create flow, rather than just swirling the ends of the bars up in a curve to do it.
I think a good example of an Writer that does a great job at bending and adjusting the letters bar widths to create that dope flow is "Ewok" MSK
Look at how the Ends of his letters get super fat and the middle bends and is fairly thin this helps alot with the flow in his style.
This is just all in my opinion though!
Peace and stay fly guy
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
Thanks for the comments. Honestly, I don't see myself as intermediate, I posted here so I could get some help, because I feel as though I've hit a "roadblock" in terms of development of my style. Regarding what rib said, I do add some of the extensions with the sole purpose of filling space, so you are right in that sense. However, I believe the letters look too bland without the bends, and I feel as though it flows better with them. And mone, I don't mind my style, but I want to progress more into more complicated stuff like that ewok flick. And ive tried messing around wiyh bar widths, just never quite sure what you meant by it. It's kinda clearer now, so I'll take my interpretation and try to play with it a bit sometime tomorrow. Once again , thank you (directed more towards mone)
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
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