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  1. #31821

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    thanks for the advice guy .. and thanks alot for not flaming on me..

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    @ IBU-well i dont have good hands, but i think you should space out the H and the A a bit. They can still be attached but it just seems too cramped and you cant see the right bar of the H very well. And im not a big fan of that R, the bent leg of the R is so overdone now

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  4. #31824

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    ^nice!

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    only ones

  6. #31826

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    go way simpler, youre trying to force style

  7. #31827

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    slay is not a common tag right ?

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    yes. yes it is. its been done many times. go ahead and practice with it, it wont hurt

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    The top one looks good, but I can't really read it. The bottom one is just kind of messy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moon View Post
    The top one looks good, but I can't really read it. The bottom one is just kind of messy.
    Top one says Snoe bottom one says Salsa.
    I'm having trouble making bombs for both of them

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    thanks for the crits i will work on that e
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aus10 View Post
    Top one says Snoe bottom one says Salsa.
    I'm having trouble making bombs for both of them
    Okay, The top one I can see working. SNOE seems original enough, and it's got a nice fluency. The letters "S" and "E" I see work well often, and it helps that the "O" is in the center. The "N" could also work. I would browse other peoples work, and then try out a style. You might not even bomb "SNOE", maybe something else, signed with your tag. Just write each letter out, make it 3D, bend it, twist it, and write it over and over, until it works. I see potential in you based on your handstyle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moon View Post
    Okay, The top one I can see working. SNOE seems original enough, and it's got a nice fluency. The letters "S" and "E" I see work well often, and it helps that the "O" is in the center. The "N" could also work. I would browse other peoples work, and then try out a style. You might not even bomb "SNOE", maybe something else, signed with your tag. Just write each letter out, make it 3D, bend it, twist it, and write it over and over, until it works. I see potential in you based on your handstyle.
    Thanks man, you're a big help!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aus10 View Post
    Thanks man, you're a big help!
    Yeah. I'm scared by how much advice I was able to squeeze out based on only 2 years of experience.

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    Im working on a throw up " Snoe " right now.
    Last edited by Aus10; 10-11-2010 at 11:07 PM. Reason: Nooby question

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    Quote Originally Posted by NosE2 View Post
    FuckTheFame, I really hate your alphabet. You're trying so hard to make it have style, you can't force it. I can't read anything except kid. Terrible.
    it says the chemical kid
    i do a lot of chemicals and my style resembles that
    im fine if people cant read it
    sometimes its fun if people just look at it as a symbol
    as long as i know what it says my job is done
    thanks for the crit tho
    i do more legible things it just gets boring after a while
    as im sure you know
    it was also done with a pen which made it hard to add flair
    so i compensated with style
    Last edited by FuckTheFame; 10-12-2010 at 02:06 AM.

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    New old hand. One liner. Bleh
    FREE DKAY

    Quote Originally Posted by weakfingers View Post
    And yes thats a gucci fill.

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    haha, I've been using that O for a minute now, too.




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    Quote Originally Posted by FuckTheFame View Post
    it says the chemical kid
    i do a lot of chemicals and my style resembles that
    im fine if people cant read it
    sometimes its fun if people just look at it as a symbol
    as long as i know what it says my job is done
    thanks for the crit tho
    i do more legible things it just gets boring after a while
    as im sure you know
    it was also done with a pen which made it hard to add flair
    so i compensated with style
    Post some legible work. It seems you're hiding behind excuses for your lack of understanding of form and flow. Not trying to hate, but I'd just like to see some legible work and go from there to produce a more "chemical" style, as you put it.


 

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