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[Sbal]

Hipe that HIP is straight, but I don't like how the e goes down like a rainbow, yaddimean?
Slay simples brosef and lose the addons

[NosE2]

FuckTheFame, I really hate your alphabet. You're trying so hard to make it have style, you can't force it. I can't read anything except kid. Terrible.

[*slayer]

thanks for the advice guy .. and thanks alot for not flaming on me..

[*Patch!]

@ IBU-well i dont have good hands, but i think you should space out the H and the A a bit. They can still be attached but it just seems too cramped and you cant see the right bar of the H very well. And im not a big fan of that R, the bent leg of the R is so overdone now

[Gatsoi]

[dubbed]

^nice!

[ghostwriter]

only ones

[*Patch!]

go way simpler, youre trying to force style

[*slayer]

slay is not a common tag right ?

[dubbed]

yes. yes it is. its been done many times. go ahead and practice with it, it wont hurt

[Aus10]

[Moon]

The top one looks good, but I can't really read it. The bottom one is just kind of messy.

[Aus10]

The top one looks good, but I can't really read it. The bottom one is just kind of messy.

Top one says Snoe bottom one says Salsa.
I'm having trouble making bombs for both of them

[H1P30N3R]

thanks for the crits i will work on that e

[Moon]

Top one says Snoe bottom one says Salsa.
I'm having trouble making bombs for both of them

Okay, The top one I can see working. SNOE seems original enough, and it's got a nice fluency. The letters "S" and "E" I see work well often, and it helps that the "O" is in the center. The "N" could also work. I would browse other peoples work, and then try out a style. You might not even bomb "SNOE", maybe something else, signed with your tag. Just write each letter out, make it 3D, bend it, twist it, and write it over and over, until it works. I see potential in you based on your handstyle.

[Aus10]

Okay, The top one I can see working. SNOE seems original enough, and it's got a nice fluency. The letters "S" and "E" I see work well often, and it helps that the "O" is in the center. The "N" could also work. I would browse other peoples work, and then try out a style. You might not even bomb "SNOE", maybe something else, signed with your tag. Just write each letter out, make it 3D, bend it, twist it, and write it over and over, until it works. I see potential in you based on your handstyle.

Thanks man, you're a big help!

[Moon]

Thanks man, you're a big help!

Yeah. I'm scared by how much advice I was able to squeeze out based on only 2 years of experience.

[Aus10]

Im working on a throw up " Snoe " right now.

[FuckTheFame]

FuckTheFame, I really hate your alphabet. You're trying so hard to make it have style, you can't force it. I can't read anything except kid. Terrible.

it says the chemical kid
i do a lot of chemicals and my style resembles that
im fine if people cant read it
sometimes its fun if people just look at it as a symbol
as long as i know what it says my job is done
thanks for the crit tho
i do more legible things it just gets boring after a while
as im sure you know
it was also done with a pen which made it hard to add flair
so i compensated with style

[MakeItTakeIt]

New old hand. One liner. Bleh