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    low res i know, but any crit at all would be appreciated...biggest Toy in here
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    Mav- Mak the "A" look more like an "A". Try making all the letters the same height.
    Possible name change.

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    This has nothing to do with me, I just thought it would serve to motivate some toys to keep practicing.

    I caught these old Demos and Difer tags the other day. Everyone has to start somewhere




    Heres what their tags look like now




    Edit: I would also like to make it clear why their tags got better. If you look at each letter, they each try less individually, and instead try to look better together. Hope that makes sense (also the demos isnt the best example, but search around and you can find real good ones.)
    Last edited by PermanentMarkers; 04-19-2011 at 04:30 PM.

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    Alright guys, got some I've been trying out... let's hear some feedback plz!

    #1

    aaand #2

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    use KEYBOARD LETTERS. I will do a tag below this that looks 10x better than either

    SOK

    Keep your letters the same size, get a new name, its impossible to fuck up keyboard letters, so thats the best way to not look foolish. If you had taken the time to read a page or two of this thread instead of posting that shit i wouldnt have to post this reply that doesnt include a picture.

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    Keyboard Letters...yes -_-

    I understand where you're coming from on keeping my letters proportional so I'll keep that in mind. However, I don't get what's wrong with my name? What about the letter style?

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    Quote Originally Posted by HeklrToo View Post
    Wow. You need to work on your Phillies, bro.

    It ain't all about it being illegible. You actually have to have a basic concept of how your letters should be constructed. Then you start to squeeze 'em at the top and bottoms, get the slight bend depening on which hand you write with, and then add loops.
    no i dont need to work on my "phillies bro"
    you come around here and my shit is considered dope who are you? just cause you cant read it dont mean my city cant. do your homework kid
    im from the hood where the fiends live next door, wigshots only, what you got a vest for?

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    Looking at it now it's ugly as shit but I guess everyone starts somewhere and looking for a starting point I guess.

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    Crits please






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    Quote Originally Posted by Norfsuthr View Post
    wilbur only thing i dont like is the w. Peso, ibu got you, listen to that dude.


    not my best, but its a nice spot
    def not feeling that tag 3s allright buth the r and d are pretty wack, dont over lap the r and turning it into a D you can do much better then that

    Quote Originally Posted by mindtrix350 View Post
    Mav- Mak the "A" look more like an "A". Try making all the letters the same height.
    Possible name change.
    wilbur, Elbur nice change very original
    Last edited by Phat 2; 04-20-2011 at 06:49 PM.

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    3rd- Gotta agree with skina. The RD isn't matching up with the 3. Clean em up.

    The other guys on this page. Do some handstyles on graph paper and learn to keep your letters proportionate to each other and on a flat line. I need to take some of that advice myself. Haha. This name is giving me a little trouble. Crits?


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    Skeng, I feel as though your first two were your stepping stones and the 3rd you have begun to get things right. #3 looks a lot better, however I still think the 'N' needs some work as it looks a lot like an 'M' to me.

    Here's a few I've been 'toy'ing with..

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    If you don't think you're dope yet, then do the following: remove extensions (quotes, lines, all that), stick to keyboard letters, do them a million times.


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    tryin out a new style, tall and skinny. doesnt work to well with the chisel tip this small, going for more of the first pic type style



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    dumping old with new with not so new and not so old


















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    kilsr, nice, I like I like...

    family reunion:



    and I'm only noticing that tall can right there next to the electrical box just now... wish i saw it then i would've racked it :\


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    i always read that "phallius" lol

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    Noise I like the bottom tag, looks pretty good.
    That "Phaillius" or however you spell it, looks pretty good. Looks classsy.

    Crits please.

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    Kthanxbai.

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    lol yo wtf phallius ?? :P
    its phattwo


 

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