[QUOTE=LeanOne;1715484]spray - i like the S and the R on that tag, but i agree with kthanxbai about the name. I tagged spray just now on a bit of scrap paper, i cant make them flow that good so i cant really help.
Thanks bro ill brain storm on a new name and thanks kthanxsbai ill keep that stuff in mind ill post stuff again real soon
And lean one im liking everything except the L is a little off to the side maybe bring it in closer to the E and extend the bottom bar of the L along the bottom of the rest of your tag
I dont really know about that fat "S" and small "EEK"
Try making the letter proportional to each other.
saven, i dont mind any of your tags but they look like there lackin something, try slanting your letters to the left, and maybe even startin the letters small and progressively getting bigger
Ight guys. I`ll crit some more. Though please crit others if you expect crits.
Lean - You need to make sure you can tell the L and the E.
Cooqy - Not really a tag concept. More of a bombing concept in my opinion. Maybe try another style for that tag. The name`s got potential.
Seek - Your S is good, I like it. Try keyboard letters, so keep your letters portional. Keep the EEK the same size as the S cause I really like that S.
Saven - It`s looking OK. Like Shroomsh said, feels like it`s missing something. I really like the letters though, which is the best thing to hit, and you got it. Just fuck around with the tag, sometimes I listen to music and just grab the newspaper and just let the wrist go.
Alright, now that I have critted 3 people here, and 1 person before, and gotten no crits back, I would appreciate crits!
Probably not the greatest, but I could sure use some help/crits plz!
Harvey - The H and A are good, though the rest of the letters need a little more. Try just screwing around with the letters.
Once again, please crit.
new style. i played a little with the s and the f. crit and help.
Ya'll need to start critting others. Shit guys, I've asked for crits 3 times got none and you guys except crits. Let's go boys.
im not giving crits because i dont think im good enough....i dont wanna give othher artists bad tips. just sayin when im better ill give a lot of crits to help others.
its lookin like it says sifen maybe pronounce it (seven) idk
sifen go simple and RAHK? go simple
nice 1 liner nose but the z needs a lil work
can some one do a simple tag of a sifen coz my simple kinda looks shitty i dont wanna post it
Rahk I think yrs is okay, but I really don't like that R. I do like the K and A a lot though. Maybe try to change something with the R.
I'm having some trouble figuring out what to do with my other letters. Any suggestions?
As my good friend once told me - just make keep looking at graffiti. You gotta figure it out from somewhere, then you figure out yr own shit. And he is mad good
k i went simpler this time like nose2 said. is it better? rahk...go simple