@ISHO-Ummm....ill prolly be hated on for even giving you critic' but that literally looks like scribble...
@ISHO-Ummm....ill prolly be hated on for even giving you critic' but that literally looks like scribble...
I agree man, not even legible.
isho go keybord letters like this I S H O cause that looks really bad and when you get better your gunna wish you never painted that trust me get a noteboke or 2 and fill em up with isho in KEYBORD letters cause thats the only way your gunna get better.Originally Posted by Isho
I fixed it, how is it now guys?
dont go painting until you atleast fill up 2 notbooks of your tag. im not trying to be a dick just saying the truth and trying to help so dont think im trying to be a dick
Last edited by OZON; 06-11-2011 at 05:41 PM.
the fuck is that thing next to what i assume is an 'I' supposed to be?I fixed it, how is it now guys?
Troopskie- your yellow tag on the last page looks good if you fixed the R, it turned into a B. Also the first one that you posted later is clean, try to progress on that one.
Last edited by dankbudz; 06-11-2011 at 11:22 PM.
Trying some different/new stuff.
Crits? Better than my last post? Do I have any hope lol
gettign better but try to make them flow a bit more
put extencions on the letters
fuck editing my old post
i had to boost the contrast and a tiny bit of saturation cause i used a highlight for the bottom ones
kind of a bitch to see so feel free to just crit the black one.
hi everyone im new :PPPP there my tag what you guys think of it
IMG000076 par jackwriter, sur Flickr
Give the J more curve and the K is funky. PS I know you from PureGraffiti. Haha, this site is better imo.
And seder that S is fucking sick. Thats the one. If anything, work on your R.
haha ace true but i dont know you ? its better ?
IMG000077 par jackwriter, sur Flickr
yo, jack, thats better, but seperate that K from the C, the part that stabs into it.
and ace-k, the S does look nice, but its definitely not the oneit gots a ways to go
IMG000080 par jackwriter, sur Flickr
a new tag :P:P:P
i kinda suck i know :P
So much better! Take out that star, but maybe keep those first quotes in...
@dankbudz- That looks pretty sick man. And i agree with whoever said your S looks good. Nice!
crits please
messing around
how bout this one? a little bit better
its a tag why are u colouring it for one
just use a single stoke/line dont needa fill this shit
idk...just pencil anywayany suggestions on how to make it look better?
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