I through these around the past hour. 3 of these contain crowns (which is not an image I have earned or particularly care for, I was just messing around.) Please give me feedback, they say Trill and Strobe. I could use some advice with the "obe" part of strobe, thanks.
Tophaa. Write it simply. For the love of god. Please just write it regularly.
I tried a simpler style with the name ViViD. I checked to see if it was taken and couldn't find anything, but please don't smash a toy for being ignorant, just lemme know.
dont cross your self out
its ok but its like ive seen that same style alreadyOriginally Posted by Googie
You mean in the second one?
@tophaa dont tweak your letters so much start simple!
crits?
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http://www.flickr.com/photos/gim157/
Heres another one... not my best but oh well...
Googie.
no still the same style, make some more extencions (longer shorter twist them)
This is my last attempt...
I tried to make the letter longer, shorter, etc. It is still the same style, I know, but, is it an improvement?
Googie.
He isn't saying it's a bad style, he's just saying it isn't very original.
My hands are sooo bad. Hardcore crit them.
i think what a ton of these toys are missing is flow in their letters... they see a few letters different places they like and try to put 'em together... it wont work. idk how to help, but try not to make each letter its own choppy letter, and think about how the letters ALL are together. i'll try to upload a pic of some examples on names that are on here recently. these helping pics are more for credits, so don't think im trying to sound preachy haha
Damn just read fatals paragraph and felt like redoing my hand. still not quite right though... Crits welcome.
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edit again... here's another product of that flow rant, it made me want to work more so thanks man.
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Last edited by Norfsuthr; 10-20-2011 at 01:47 AM.
Fue and Norf runnin shit on the toy forum hands.
mnnice- fix your m, u, s, e, and r
bored thought id upload some
do we only get extra credits if its an attached image?
bump from last page. dankbudz- Too much goin on with your lowercase d, your letters are leaning the same way which is good, maybe try some capital Es in the 2nd one.Damn just read fatals paragraph and felt like redoing my hand. still not quite right though... Crits welcome.
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edit again... here's another product of that flow rant, it made me want to work more so thanks man.
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yea lower case D is fucked, ive been doin upper case E's and they just get mad boring. bout to do a few quickies and upload em
that first on is dope, but the end of it is mad empty.
on the 2nd i got no idea what the second letter is, unless its a V. and those lines on the K are kinda random, unless im missing something haha
1st is 8you second is ATEYOU. Not sure where you're seeing a K?
I agree about the 1st one lookin emtpy, I'm having trouble with U's because theyre too simple. Same with O's, I need to find some inspiration.
Waiting on your new ones..
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