well it is either you are uneducated on steps of learning or you think your progressed enough to add all those curves add ons etc.... you can take my crit and use it or do as you want but at the end of the day what Im telling you will help you in the future.
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
Do I think I've progressed enough to add a little style to my tag? Sure as hell I do.
The style has evolved from countless times writing it.
It's not like I started yesterday and decided to add on a bit of style, it's came naturally.
Going simpler would be detremental to my progression.
ok think what you will ask some other heads that have been around here for a while their opinion since I dont know what im talking about.
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
saltaire, your hand movements show promise for future potential.
but our opinions are that the way your tag is right now: not working...
it's messed up and highly unreadable.
you gotta choose between being here, posting your shit and accepting advice/crits/comments - or get hated on for being a douche.
those are the two options these people will be giving you. would be cool to think ahead.
Originally Posted by ven0m
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
Nah man its readable, but there is too much going on. Take a lil step back and build your tag from that.
New tag
Right fine. I'll remove some of the stuff, but it's not like I sat and spent 5 minutes adding every single curve and shit to it. I done it in like 5 seconds and it just comes naturally.
And I'm trying to be polite so I don't come across as a dick -which im not- but I'm being treated like I started writing yesterday and im adding all this shit onto it articifcally, when its just natural.
Thanks though, dont get a bad impression of me.
Nine - Make the N not different from eachother and make the E more clear
Saltire - We know that you didnt do it in like 5 minutes or shit. But we just want to say that its better too take a lil step back cause it probably will be much better the next time you take this step to more style
its allgood bro dont take it personal take it constructively ....remember your in the toy section for a reason to learn. I have been writing for 4 years and I just started trying to do simples. Point being how long you have been writing means nothing we are always learning and developing style.
Last edited by H1P30N3R; 04-10-2012 at 05:31 PM.
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Alright, ty man.
ill go take some flicks on my phone of some tags i done a few days ago and post them up
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
nyce !
second flick gmv
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
Okay what about this one? Sorry about the decorations, I done it without thinking.
ause? i think the A and S work together... make ur E capital and just like that S, all u haveta do is not connect the bottom right part to the middle, and for the U just give it a right bar... n yea no addons yet, good luck
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
Its good simple and shit but make the S also round cause youre not working with capitals NE and O its kinda weird if they have roundings and the S not.
Still needs some work, also did them way too fast cause it's a sketchy area.
Last edited by cred1384; 04-11-2012 at 05:51 PM.
alright ill work on it
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
This page is impressive because theres almost no paper in it...
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
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