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Few different styles I was playing with.
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Few different styles I was playing with.
Last edited by KehmONE; 04-26-2012 at 10:10 AM.
Regardless of any previous posts, I do not condone nor take part in the act of vandalism. I simply document the work of others.
kehm, looking good, try spicing up your letters or something...keep the handstyle you got there its clean and what not but work on another one that is a little bit more complex...dont over do it, just smalllll tweaks and shit
here's my tag, a shitty one, but it's a starting idea.
^ lol i like how you throw the rock through the glass at the end. lose that thing coming outa your O that loops around, go more simple and for now make ur Z look like a normal Z, it looks like a weird 5 sorta, your k is decent and ur R is ok just keep working on it and maybe dont have ur k and r hang down like that. keep practicing man, you will see improvement.
^nice D haha. I dont think that K goes with the rest tho.
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thats a funky tag norfsuthr, i like it, whats the letter in between the O and the J though? a handwriting e or something?
mildstyles, i dont like that E at all but the other letters are dope, maybe try to spice up your N abit or somthing, play with your N and D or somthing.
Its a W tard.
Mild, try a K with a downward extension like so
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He told you to play with your d!!!! I am in agreement about your k naked.
oh shit how did i not see it was a w before
Crits? I fucked up the T but it was cold as a mother fucker last night
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looks decent tak, id lose that line at the bottom and either make it a straight line or that fading to the bottum thing. maybe lose the kick thing on the K practice other kicks for it on paper and for now make it more simple, maybe try a lower case A along with working on your current uppercase A. just keep practicing man
Mido- try to close up ur D more, dont have the line in it so short. make ur I a little bit longer but it looks decent, keep working at it
Thanks Kaze, I usually do a straight line actually hahaha I dont know why I decided to do that last night
Mido - sick drips and on the D Pull down the line and leave the gap at the top
Tak - Almost there got a sick throw up and now all you need to do is fix that tag up a bit and it be sick in my mind
Critz please
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yeh i know what u meen blackmath, just spur the moment type thing lol.
axil-i like this one the most out of the stuff uv posted i think, maybe make ur C abit skinnier, like dont have it come out so much and i would lose the hanging leg on ur R, try making it normal or try to do somthing else with it. also make ur A abiiiittt wider...good progress though
blackmath,Kaze, and Axil thanks for the crits. I'll try to fix the D and the i
Axil, like kaze said its a good progression from your other stuff. The C should be a bit more skinny to cancel out that negative space.
^^^ was thinking the same thing both tags look pretty good though guys
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