honestly aeks to me your tag never really was that good, and I think once you get a decent handy down you'll regret seeing that crap around your town.
honestly aeks to me your tag never really was that good, and I think once you get a decent handy down you'll regret seeing that crap around your town.
yeah you're right
Idk I just hate when I got two sides tellin me two completely different things
But I'll go back to simple letters
Edit again:
Simpler
Any better?
Edit again haha:
Word though thanks for helpin me out guys
Last edited by Mr yarbles; 08-31-2008 at 06:48 PM.
Originally Posted by the cannabis evangelist
looks good but wtf is up with the colors
maby if it dripped a little more or a fatter marker it would look better
Damen- its sick i love it.
Aeks- the simples look really good.
crits please
Step in the right direction? or should I start over?
Rouge seperate the bar from the loop part of your r
make your g simpler and yor e simpler
FL your letters look real nice but i think you need more going on around them. maby like some swerls on the top and bottom, more arrows not connected to anything
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^this last one came out pretty bad. haha look at what i was sitting on though.. that little fuckin piece of metal.
<3 climbing shit.
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MR YARBLES thats definately a step in the right direction.. it looks pretty fly
ROGE - maybe keep the marker on the paper as much as you can on each letter, ie the R and G, i guess it throws me off a bit... idk im so toy
Mr YARBLES - i think your on the right track and its lookin dope.
VOID - i can see that goin somewhere, i reckon just keep doin it over and over and you see little changes that you like and can go with. works for me anyway.
any crits on this? im still tryin to work out how to use these paint markers, they been mad streaky on some shit? would that just be coz the surface is too smooth?
thanks guys ill work on it
Aeks-looks fresh i really like that e
sek-put more space between your e and k. Still keep it close but that looks like the e and k are connected.
Last edited by FLSteele16; 09-01-2008 at 07:22 AM. Reason: give crits
Alirhgt thanks alot everybody
Sek you've got the right idea just space things out a bit more
haha scratch I love climbin shit too
But Ic an't read your tag
Yoek?
haha close enough, its yaek. X]
climbing shit is literally my favorite part about writing
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First tag i've done with my K-60. Just the other day.
Yarbles its a step the right way... but go simpler.
Really?
Hmm I dunno how to make it much simpler
Tone down the last e?
And the K and the s. The a's alright.
agdsg
Last edited by gcrolla; 02-26-2009 at 12:17 AM.
Word I'll work on that
Onyl problem is when i don't do my k like that i fuck it up for some reason
But thanks
Say it's good keep that up
Scratch- first i thought they were bad J's then realized they were prey
sick Y's. Just space em out a bit. Once i knew the letters it looked allot
better so make it so it's distinguishable right away.
Sek- Lookin prey good, just lose the extension on the S or just shorten it.
Say- Deec, try painting the stickers black or something before writing them and that silver will pop, what marker? looks like a nice silver.
Otek- its aight, the T doesent fit or flow in and the K swirl was used incorrectly but its alright. Keep hitting books for a while.
Aight, first night out in the new town.
advice/crits anyone?
i like the r but the p and everything else needs a lil more style ya know
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