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[bbuba]

I feel old coming back here... I havnt done this shit in 2 years...
And look at this gay ass sig

[Moon]

here's an animation of my name..
NO, this is not ment to be stylish, or have any style whatsoever..
just wanted to try animating.

Huh. Is it just me, or are the letters to... normal? Try to make things more, I don't know, wavy? If you look at other handstyles, you'll figure it out.

[MakeItTakeIt]

Huh. Is it just me, or are the letters to... normal? Try to make things more, I don't know, wavy? If you look at other handstyles, you'll figure it out.

"NO, this is not ment to be stylish, or have any style whatsoever.."

[dubbed]

lookin like wump

ya i didnt really close that O

[MoganOne]

Thanks FTF!
As for your hands, I'm having a lot of trouble reading your first word. I see a G and possibly an E. The G in "HIGH" is your strongest letter. But I think you just need to start slower and develop solid lines and form. Although this isn't the exact picture I wanted to show, it does show how a simple handstyle can go a long way. (http://www.flickr.com/photos/36thchamber/4882881114/)

Mone- I'm kind of baffled at how good your piecing is and how much your hands seem to suffer. On any note, you have a good start happening. I'd lose the loop in the O. It's reading as an (honestly, more stylish) e, especially in the last hand your posted. And I'd rethink your R completely. I'm just not feeling it. It also looks like you might be doing your hand too slowly, causing some unclean lines.

Word I know what u are sayin because I do my e like that too... so it looks like Mener at times... but I just need to make the loop more apparent cuz it is easier to make a fresh one liner with a loop in the O

[Moon]

"NO, this is not ment to be stylish, or have any style whatsoever.."

Now I just feel like a douche.

[dubbed]

that animation is alright. a throw animation would look cool

[Anon937]

Haha, some new shit I'm going for...
Prolly really shitty but I tried.

[IbuprofenTablets]

Crits? Preferably from someone who actually has good hands.

[lord_plankton]

it sucks.

[IbuprofenTablets]

You'd be a better troll if you never posted any pics.

Bump for crits.

[Zookyook]

chunked that arrow up a bit ibu... other than that its fresh though... maybe make the R a little more chiseled... it just seems more rounded than the other letters

[NouveauP]

Zook has a good idea with the R. However, I'd keep the top rounded and make that kicking bar a bit more rigid. But even if you don't do any of that, I'd work on making that hand a little cleaner. the HAI is really nice, but the R and the arrow have a few little mishaps. But this is a dope hand. I'm feeling it.

And I'll bump myself for some crits.

[IbuprofenTablets]

What do mean mishaps on the R, and Arrow?
Are your referring to the bleed spots on the R, and arrow?

If so, that wasn't my fault. It was table that I was writing on that made me fuck up on the R, and arrow. See, it had a crevice in it, so anytime I would write over the crevice, it would fuck my line up.

Anyway..

On the the Jaep hand (bottom): the J is wild, but that big loop you put on it just looks
out of place. I'd suggest making the loop subtle.
that's my only real gripe with your hand. It's nice, and consistent.

Bump that top hand, too.

[NouveauP]

Yeah, I was referring to the bleeding. Nevermind then, I retract my crit. Haha. But on any note, you have a really fresh style and honestly don't need crits from me. I want to see some street shit you have, forreal.

And thanks for the crit! I have varying degrees on how big the loop is (actually, I do a lot more of that style J where the bottom comes to a point and doesn't loop at all) but I feel you. I do get kinda nuts with it. And the top hand is the hand I've had since I started writing that name, so I'm glad it's considered decent.

[*slayer]

[ReSeM]

whoa whoa whoa simple it up some more
slay is so unoriginal and underlining letters with a letter is a no no. Ur lines are shaky so I can tell you took your time. Handies are quick and flow

[H1P30N3R]

[FuckTheFame]

hipe - a crown off the circle would look dope

[dubbed]

slayer start from scratch. write your letters like how you would normally write them
hipe looking good, i just dont like how the bottom of the E curves down
fame im not really sure what your trying to do here. if you used a chisel tip marker it might make it look more clean