4th ones nice man.
4th ones nice man.
seywhat -I like the 9th SEYAR the best. I'm not feeling the e in it though or in the 6th one either. I like the 2nd SOREN best.
Hm, I've been writing jek for a while but I kinda like JANA.
crits are good
i dig that jek alot, both pretty solid though. capital a's are a bitch
newt- basically wat everyone else said, but also maybe try to add a lil loop like ur n in ur w
svc- cant read it homie, try sum more simple letters man
hekler- them shits is bangin, would like to see em on the street
havent written or been on here for a year or 2...
Zewl- Always comin with it. Simple, effective style
Faser- I'm guessing that says "JERS" but there are so many tails and add-ons that i can't tell. Slow down a little bit and work on a simple, clean, proportioned handstyle.
JANA- I think the N needs to read as more of an N. Play around with your shapes. Maybe making those A's go straight down instead of curving in might give it a cleaner look. Just a suggestion. The JEK isn't bad. I think the J needs to dominate more
Sey- Nice hand! You've got some crazy R's. And all I've been doing lately is carrying around some markers, but I have some missions planned
Couldn't ever get my E's how I wanted, but anyway. Kind of got a cool effect (unintentionally) on the bottom two
Hekel- Your last one is my favorite. I dig the capital K but not really the L or the little tail thing on the top left of the H. Regardless, it flows real well.
These are my first real attempts at a tag.
I put a couple different styles, so crits on which look good and which are trash?
shaky ass fuckin lines bro, and i wouldnt curve the A or N, i dont think that looks good. just write it a thousand times fast
Last edited by ian; 02-17-2011 at 01:43 PM.
I think it looks cleaner, and I like the style a lot more. But I'd like crits.
idk dude i just dont like that style
a few i did:
Ante, stop doing that with your N. Matter of fact, get a new N. And this isnt cursive, connecting your letters like that is not a good look.
Wednesday drunken style haha
I feel like your drunken is just as good as your sober....
first handie's boomin, ian. props
nouv-3rd one is my fav diggin the l
youth- control the voices
sato- keep it simple seems scratched down on paper but the drunken influence makes sense
ian- coming along nice you listen to advice unlike most of us keepin it sweet and simple for now