Take it as a compliment. I was mearly making the point that you have a damn good looking S and that he might use that as inspiration.
Take it as a compliment. I was mearly making the point that you have a damn good looking S and that he might use that as inspiration.
this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)Originally Posted by gim
hope this was helpful.
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oh okay thanks a lot man!!this is what i mean by basing them off eachother, making them have similar structure to maintain flow(note these letters are spaced out so you could clearly see each letter.)
hope this was helpful.
hey thanks and yeah i just did that real quick i got a fat sharpie
QUOTE=SynOne;1745347]Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.
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Syn: I really like this tag personally. The square quotes look cool and it has a cool flow to it. I know I am supposed to be somewhat critical so perhaps the bottom of the "S" could extend out as far as the top and have a consistent width with the top as well. Nice improvement.
I think this looks pretty dope Hayst. I don’t think the upward stroke on the end of the “y” tail is necessary. It almost looks like it might be trying to form another letter but didn’t get completed. “T” could be a tad more snug next to the “S”.
Agreed … Here I’ll show what a toy I am. I can’t read your whole tag bro. I got the end where it looks to be an “itone” or “ixone”. If I had to guess it says Artixone … let’s play some charades! First word one syllable haha Anyway you write it consistent so that’s dope. The outline above is pretty sick.
[QUOTE=shush4;1745918]Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
Well to start it looks like you wrote your name jacked up on speed. ☺ Just a tad shaky on the letters. Try writing it a bit slower - ? If I saw your name up I would think you were trying to name yourself “Sushi” which just makes me hungry.
Uhh … make the letters the same height and width. So that the “E” is as wide as the “S” and as tall. Mixing lower and uppercase letters feels weird imo. Do not have the “E” center hash line cross into the “S”. Maybe bend the “I” in the same direction as the main stem of the “E”.
Looks dope! Also looks like a gang handstyle from what I have seen around. Tall and angular.Attachment 33103
found this ahhaha kinda old
feel free to crit/hate
i just thought this page needed a bit of flava
BUMP
- Never received any crits on the above post so I bumped it.
Sorry for the mega long post but I didn’t want to double post so I crammed it all into one. I’ll try to go through the newer pages later. So busy I can only get on here once in a while to check out the new tags and comment.
Alpha: I like the circular one. It's got character. I would like to see it done with a mop with some drips comming off the bottom of the circle bit. Can you post up one in marker? ohhh it says Antik One by the way.
bump for crits
went from this:
to this :
crits on the new one?
not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago
looks dope i don't like the star inside or whatever that it is inside the S just my opinion thoughwent from this:
to this :
crits on the new one?
Your H's seem to dissapear. give them more deffinitnion.
tried to take what was said into consideration:
I think that works a lot better. I am digging the first S on the first one, the second H on the second one, and the U on the last one. I think if you combine those into one you will have something solid going on. Well done. Work on consistency if you like it and tweek as needed. Or if you made the U from the first one you posted with the * and vanishing H's in two strokes (the left portion and right portion seperate. it looks like you did it in one starting with the left then up and back down for the right) I think that would clean it up and give you a good looking U.
Last edited by PETER; 09-25-2011 at 02:33 PM.
wow this came out mad toy
Shush its lookin better but make the letters the same size and either level with eachother or at a consistent slant.
Phat I dig that shit. H looks too close to the p tohugh.
Crits? Never got any last time but "Looks better"
dont go so long with the N and the Y looks like a U make it bigger and make it flow more with the other letters
S not really feeling it
why the fuck should I change it if I like it?
I've been using it for a while now, yes, and until I get bored with it, I'm gonna keep using it... it's easy, fast, flowy, classy, nice and effective at the same time.
it might suck balls in this flick right there because it's a train and the surface is rounded as opposed to flat. I don't know if you've sprayed on such surfaces before, but it's not the easiest task too get an even and clean result
lol dont get mad nig ga
and yes yes i have i just dont have that much trouble with it
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