QUOTE=SynOne;1745347]Retry with less style now, I can't really get down the S and Y, but I love that extended n... Not sure why.
Syn: I really like this tag personally. The square quotes look cool and it has a cool flow to it. I know I am supposed to be somewhat critical so perhaps the bottom of the "S" could extend out as far as the top and have a consistent width with the top as well. Nice improvement.
[QUOTE=shush4;1745918]Can I get some eggs and CRITS on this tag style. Given it was done in pen as the prismas i have make it look funny. any suggestions to markers for tags in a book i'm well open to. and no i haven't searched for that one really. either way :
Well to start it looks like you wrote your name jacked up on speed. ☺ Just a tad shaky on the letters. Try writing it a bit slower - ? If I saw your name up I would think you were trying to name yourself “Sushi” which just makes me hungry.
Sorry for the mega long post but I didn’t want to double post so I crammed it all into one. I’ll try to go through the newer pages later. So busy I can only get on here once in a while to check out the new tags and comment.
Alpha: I like the circular one. It's got character. I would like to see it done with a mop with some drips comming off the bottom of the circle bit. Can you post up one in marker? ohhh it says Antik One by the way.
not feeling it
you havent changed your handstyle since like 3 months ago
I think that works a lot better. I am digging the first S on the first one, the second H on the second one, and the U on the last one. I think if you combine those into one you will have something solid going on. Well done. Work on consistency if you like it and tweek as needed. Or if you made the U from the first one you posted with the * and vanishing H's in two strokes (the left portion and right portion seperate. it looks like you did it in one starting with the left then up and back down for the right) I think that would clean it up and give you a good looking U.
Last edited by PETER; 09-25-2011 at 03:33 PM.
wow this came out mad toy
Shush its lookin better but make the letters the same size and either level with eachother or at a consistent slant.
Phat I dig that shit. H looks too close to the p tohugh.
Crits? Never got any last time but "Looks better"
dont go so long with the N and the Y looks like a U make it bigger and make it flow more with the other letters
S not really feeling it
I've been using it for a while now, yes, and until I get bored with it, I'm gonna keep using it... it's easy, fast, flowy, classy, nice and effective at the same time.
it might suck balls in this flick right there because it's a train and the surface is rounded as opposed to flat. I don't know if you've sprayed on such surfaces before, but it's not the easiest task too get an even and clean result
lol dont get mad nig ga
and yes yes i have i just dont have that much trouble with it
just gotta work on the sizing i think.. open to crits and opinions also let me know which you like the better...
waiting for my pilot jumbo to ship in so i can practice with fatter lines too