@Mock - The first 3 letters look pretty good together, I dunno the K is throwing it off for me but I'm probably not the best one to give crits.
Just realized how bad it actually looks after I scan it, oh well, fuck it.
@Mock - The first 3 letters look pretty good together, I dunno the K is throwing it off for me but I'm probably not the best one to give crits.
Just realized how bad it actually looks after I scan it, oh well, fuck it.
wow.. 3 months? really?Originally Posted by Risk_Inicijativa
hah Phatu think that I far away from graff? well, its true i guess
Yeah I know dude, I'm trying to work on my K. I take all the criticism I can. If you want crits you need to give crits.@Mock - The first 3 letters look pretty good together, I dunno the K is throwing it off for me but I'm probably not the best one to give crits.
Just realized how bad it actually looks after I scan it, oh well, fuck it.
Your tag needs some rhythm. Just write it down fast. A LOT.
I know I lack flow, but fuck seems like everything I put down ends up looks the same without any feel for it.
Last edited by Cynical; 12-07-2011 at 08:19 PM.
hows this? I rarely practice my handys, just recently been workin em out
Picture 132 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
black book:
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
lol srry same pic twice
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
o crap srry wrong thread
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
Tell what ya think ima young writer trying to learn!
-CesspoolQuoted from the fucking truth!
L2Postinrighttopis.
got some tags to post....
thats it
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
dkodeim feelin the last one and the third one (without the lines in the O)
thanks snoke, i like the pink one myself i kinda fucked the D at the top part i was testing the paint
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
what i do in my english class, can't wait for the fall semester to be over
guyitsmathew.com
http://www.flickr.com/photos/gim157/
That's what I love to see^
It's not good yet, but if you keep practicing like that you'll get better so much faster. Keep playing with different ways of writing each letter and combining different ones. Be creative, try new shit, and keep at it.
crits on this? feelin alooot more confident with hands now, all of these were drawn super fast,I find it flows alot nicer, but i know they still need a fuckload of work
Picture 135 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
They all suck. Stop trying so hard on each letter. You're still forcing style onto each letter, just let your natural motion do the work.
I feel like you don't really understand the concept of flow as it applies to graff yet. Do what the kid a couple posts above is doing, 100's of simple tags over and over.
thats what the natural flow is for me right now though, thats why the y is just regular and i write pages and pages of simple tags, just recently started trying to ass style
is this decent? other than the R wich turned into a B
Picture 112 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
Much better than your last post, fix that L up though its awkward.
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