!!1/2!! Yr Writers Battle

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 08-21-2005 06:14 AM

trance^^

rise one^^

epod^^

D.N.A^^

sangui^^

haz3^^

katze^^

cess!^^

there all done

**vegimite on toast** · 08-21-2005 06:16 AM

Yuck.

**-=AgA=-TrAnCe** · 08-21-2005 06:16 AM

sorry to all who wanted to be in on this battle, only enteries pmed to me by yesterday were posted, good luck to all and please remember the people in this battle are all toys and have only been writing half a year
constructive critisim only plz

**vegimite on toast** · 08-21-2005 06:22 AM

Yuck.

**all city** · 08-21-2005 06:55 AM

Katze was the only half decent one...

Originally posted by vegimite on toast
yuck

I'm with vegimite on toast

**Tanner** · 08-21-2005 07:05 AM

errrrrrr...... epod? these are very Toy

**Enemy** · 08-21-2005 07:21 AM

erm not the best toy battle....i voted cess. wtf is up with that painted piece

:huh:

**chase4** · 08-21-2005 07:30 AM

oh my god cess did a throwie surprise surfuckinprise

**DNA** · 08-21-2005 09:31 AM

yea! someone voted for me! ( i did a null vote like i usually do when i am in a battle)

edit: oh! i just realized this battle is for 1/2 year writers. i thought it said 1/2, like 1 OR 2 year writers. imm like a 3/4 year writer.

**segway** · 08-21-2005 11:05 AM

epod you need to steady your hand and you dont need to use prismas yet, save some money and use crayolas or something. thats what i use half the time. i voted katze he actually had some letter structure. people need to start breaking down their letters into pieces and then you will progress way faster

**wreckone.** · 08-21-2005 11:06 AM

Epod, you suck ass.

**Merk** · 08-21-2005 11:24 AM

Personally i liked trance,DNA,and Rise One..

**all city** · 08-21-2005 11:26 AM

I think he used Sharpies. There was no need. It looks etchy because you didnt layer it right. To make a sketch look clean you first 1. draw out the basic rough sketch, then erase bad lines. 2. darken and detail after erasing bad lines and cleaning up. 3. Go over in BIC. pen. Let ink dry. 4. Erase sketch leaving only ink, no pencil lines. 5. Darken detail in pen.
I think he actually did it in Sharpie with no pre-sketch, that's why there are no steady lines.

**wreckone.** · 08-21-2005 11:33 AM

You can see a pencil outline in his attempt to make a D, which he failed horribly in doing. Pen sketches aren't hard.

**all city** · 08-21-2005 11:58 AM

I know they aren't hard, but sharpies arent the best for outlining, mainly filling.

**disposable_hero** · 08-21-2005 12:27 PM

some have potential ome r just weak\
but i voted cess i dunno why

**DNA** · 08-21-2005 12:29 PM

haha, cess' looks like onions.

**-resq-love-obk-** · 08-21-2005 02:23 PM

why do you alllll insist on battling? you need to preactice first. and get out of the toy forum. and you mustdo that by painting something and then someone who has not been told to post in the toy forum says you can leave the toy forum judging by your work. or something. and then when you get out of the toy forum you will still be toy but you can start battles. i feel like im just typing and not thinking so this probably wont make sense.